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Arthago Brixcoft


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(November 3rd 2013 04:40 PM)Took an arrow in the knee Wrote:  A pretty good bio though there are a few things that could be improved.

Under politics views you wrote "bring septims to everyone" but in ESO time the Septim's haven't been born yet so it should just be money or coin.

Survivalist and founder of a guild (or whatever you call it) is an occupation not title.

I understand that he's a master survivalist but no one could live in the Alikir desert for more than a few months at the most much less seven years.

I do like the "stranded" thing you have and how he trains others to survive though a doctrine isn't really something you'd call a group like that, a guild or if you're going to use the chars surname company would be a better word though I'm aware it isn't a company I'm just using it as an example.
thanks for the advice mate

(November 2nd 2013 04:07 PM)MLGjorge Wrote:  Firstname - Arthago
Surname - Brixcoft
Title -
Sex - Male
Race - Breton\Redguard
Age - 37
Occupation - survivalist and founder of the Brixcoft Union
Faction - Daggerfall Covenant
Appearance - 6"3 220 pounds , green eyes , long and wide square shaped head , smushed in nose and a light tanned skin , Dirty blonde hair and short beard.
Personality - Smart , intuitive ,overly trusting , funny and energetic
Social Background/Backstory - Arthago has always taken life slowly , Experiencing the wonders of the world step by step . He was born to a Redguard mother and a Breton father in stros m'kai , Both were farmers and had some of the best livestock in stros m'kai , Making them wealthy. His parents broke up when he was 21 , they moved to mainland tamriel , he moved between his fathers home and his mothers home , His father lived in Daggerfall , High Rock and His mother lived in Sentinel , He worked as a bartender and a Mercenary for a while , He had receiveda contract to go to the Alik'r Desert and kill an Imperial by the name of Luizo Cassouilli He got the job done , But his struggle was getting out of the Alik'r Desert . A sandstorm blew his map to the skies , After the sandstorm he was lost , Nowhere to go and Nobody was remotely close to him . He had a horse and his only hope of survival was getting as close as possible to civilization without having it die. His hopes were splattered , His horse ran when a second Sandstorm came , Tripped and messed up its legs , It wasen't completely useless it provided clothing and food. After 3 months of killing surrounding wilflife for food , Arthago was getting used to desert life and preferred it to city life. He spent 7 years in the desert. He found civilization when a dangerously huge sandstorm had caused him to travel east to Joneth. There he found that 7 years had gone by compared to his estimated 3 years. He found out that both his parents had died but his years of desert living had made him simply not care. He did not miss them and on several occasions forgot about them. He then founded a group called the Brixcoft Docrtine who practiced Surviving in the most barren and bleak places on tamriel , They lived on solstheim for 6 months and lived in black marshs swamps for a year then they moved up north to morrowind and lived there for 3 years. While he does not do much survival practices anymore His doctrine still does . He resides in Daggerfall and mostly trains for battle , He believes that when it is time of War every citizen must take up arms and defend there faction.
Best Memory - Life in the Alik'r
Worst Memory - When in Solstheim , he and a couple of crew members were attacked by several Rieklings and ashspawn. there was 8 3 survived 1 badly injured
Skills - Blacksmithing , Destruction , Bow , Enchanting , One handed , Block , Light armor and restoration
Challenges for the Character - Adapting to life in the Alik'r
Birthsign The tower
Religious Views Worships aedra , Akatosh mostly
Politics Views Daggerfall will bring coin to everybody , Ebonheart will bring war to Everyone and And if the Dominion gets control of the throne the worst tyranny in the history of tamriel will be upon us.
This post was last modified: November 3rd 2013 08:43 PM by MLGjorge
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A pretty good bio though there are a few things that could be improved.

Under politics views you wrote "bring septims to everyone" but in ESO time the Septim's haven't been born yet so it should just be money or coin.

Survivalist and founder of a guild (or whatever you call it) is an occupation not title.

I understand that he's a master survivalist but no one could live in the Alikir desert for more than a few months at the most much less seven years.

I do like the "stranded" thing you have and how he trains others to survive though a doctrine isn't really something you'd call a group like that, a guild or if you're going to use the chars surname company would be a better word though I'm aware it isn't a company I'm just using it as an example.


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(November 3rd 2013 04:40 PM)Took an arrow in the knee Wrote:  A pretty good bio though there are a few things that could be improved.

Under politics views you wrote "bring septims to everyone" but in ESO time the Septim's haven't been born yet so it should just be money or coin.

Survivalist and founder of a guild (or whatever you call it) is an occupation not title.

I understand that he's a master survivalist but no one could live in the Alikir desert for more than a few months at the most much less seven years.

I do like the "stranded" thing you have and how he trains others to survive though a doctrine isn't really something you'd call a group like that, a guild or if you're going to use the chars surname company would be a better word though I'm aware it isn't a company I'm just using it as an example.
thanks for the advice mate

(November 2nd 2013 04:07 PM)MLGjorge Wrote:  Firstname - Arthago
Surname - Brixcoft
Title -
Sex - Male
Race - Breton\Redguard
Age - 37
Occupation - survivalist and founder of the Brixcoft Union
Faction - Daggerfall Covenant
Appearance - 6"3 220 pounds , green eyes , long and wide square shaped head , smushed in nose and a light tanned skin , Dirty blonde hair and short beard.
Personality - Smart , intuitive ,overly trusting , funny and energetic
Social Background/Backstory - Arthago has always taken life slowly , Experiencing the wonders of the world step by step . He was born to a Redguard mother and a Breton father in stros m'kai , Both were farmers and had some of the best livestock in stros m'kai , Making them wealthy. His parents broke up when he was 21 , they moved to mainland tamriel , he moved between his fathers home and his mothers home , His father lived in Daggerfall , High Rock and His mother lived in Sentinel , He worked as a bartender and a Mercenary for a while , He had receiveda contract to go to the Alik'r Desert and kill an Imperial by the name of Luizo Cassouilli He got the job done , But his struggle was getting out of the Alik'r Desert . A sandstorm blew his map to the skies , After the sandstorm he was lost , Nowhere to go and Nobody was remotely close to him . He had a horse and his only hope of survival was getting as close as possible to civilization without having it die. His hopes were splattered , His horse ran when a second Sandstorm came , Tripped and messed up its legs , It wasen't completely useless it provided clothing and food. After 3 months of killing surrounding wilflife for food , Arthago was getting used to desert life and preferred it to city life. He spent 7 years in the desert. He found civilization when a dangerously huge sandstorm had caused him to travel east to Joneth. There he found that 7 years had gone by compared to his estimated 3 years. He found out that both his parents had died but his years of desert living had made him simply not care. He did not miss them and on several occasions forgot about them. He then founded a group called the Brixcoft Docrtine who practiced Surviving in the most barren and bleak places on tamriel , They lived on solstheim for 6 months and lived in black marshs swamps for a year then they moved up north to morrowind and lived there for 3 years. While he does not do much survival practices anymore His doctrine still does . He resides in Daggerfall and mostly trains for battle , He believes that when it is time of War every citizen must take up arms and defend there faction.
Best Memory - Life in the Alik'r
Worst Memory - When in Solstheim , he and a couple of crew members were attacked by several Rieklings and ashspawn. there was 8 3 survived 1 badly injured
Skills - Blacksmithing , Destruction , Bow , Enchanting , One handed , Block , Light armor and restoration
Challenges for the Character - Adapting to life in the Alik'r
Birthsign The tower
Religious Views Worships aedra , Akatosh mostly
Politics Views Daggerfall will bring coin to everybody , Ebonheart will bring war to Everyone and And if the Dominion gets control of the throne the worst tyranny in the history of tamriel will be upon us.
This post was last modified: November 3rd 2013 08:43 PM by MLGjorge
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