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Posting, bios, and books (etc) in the lore forums can be scary (or at least it is for me) so here is a little forum to post drafts for people to post their work, to see what feedback they get,

Please post the main body of your work in spoilers so it doesn't take up too much room.


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A journey through a Daedric Realm.
Taking part in a War of Succession.


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Eh here goes....Its a bio for a character I'm going to use in an RP soon...

Firstname - Anrelri

Surname - Lorchel

Sex - female

Race-Boiche (Bosmer)

Age – 15

Alignment - true neutral, her split personality is chaotic neutral

Height: 5’1 feet

Occupation – Scholar, apprentice mage

Afflictions - Vampire.

Bloodline - Keerilth

Manner of infection - Ambushed while hunting, attacked by vampire that she managed to wound after it had bit her. Lived normally for the next three days upon the last noticed a change in skin tone and tooth length.

Appearance – A rather small-looking, fragile Boiche woman. On the first sight one could think her deathly ill but infact she just avoids sunlight and others in general. Under her right eye there is a single long jagged scar that goes from her forehead to her cheek, like from an animal’s claw, she tends to hide this with green war paint stylised as an eye similar to the eye of magnus and she commonly wears a green cloak and cowl alongside this. Her face is a mask of humour and goodwill, but there is a sparkle in her eyes, showing a mute tortured soul behind this mask.

Personality – She is a strange character to some. Being both humble and good natured on the one hand and also cruel and heartless on the other hand. She cannot stand seeing other people suffering and gets angry at witnessing injustice, crime and famine. But she has no problem with plundering or torturing if the need arises. When met with adventurers or soldiers she is easily scared and intimidated but will feel challenged to which she can´t help reacting too sarcastically and venomously. However she herself is sometimes taken aback by her own cruelty, to a point where she will seek forgiveness from those she has wronged.

Best Memory – Learning her first spell from an Altmer mage named Eltharon.

Worst memory-Being attacked by large animal and subsequently having her face scared, this has also given her a fear of large cats.

Skills – magic, can speak in all of the beast languages, archery, short blades and stealth.

Challenges for the Character – Sometimes she is in conflict with herself. Her split personalities are sometimes difficult to bring together and coordinate. And while she wants sorely to do good and help others, she often can’t show it properly as her alternate self tends to take over. Beside magic her only defence is a bow that was gifted to her. Her ‘’good’’ side hates weapons and violence at all wanting people to just get along. She also has a problem speaking ''normal'' Tamrielic to a point where it is often difficult to her to express herself through speech this is because she grew up around the beast languages and Bosmeris as her tribe valued them above the ''normal'' tongue of man and Mer.

Religious Views – She worships the Y’ffre, and follows the green pact almost fanatically .as she never eats plants, feeling it her way of re-paying the god of forests. Besides Y’ffre she also worships the Divines, especially Zenithar and Arkay.

Politics Views – Being born in the regular tribal lifestyle of the Boiche she realises the importance that good relations with other provinces can bring. In general she doesn’t have too much interest in politics, preferring to revere Y’ffre as a ruler in favour of others

EDIT: I updated it!

Under debate: making her a vampire one of the Valenwood clans though such as the Bonsamu vampires which are indistinguishable from normal Bosmer unless seen by candlelight, the Keerilth who can disintegrate into mist. The Telboth who prey on children, take their place in the family, and eventually murder all of the family members
This post was last modified: December 10th 2013 08:24 AM by ragnar-ice blood


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I like it, what do you think of my ideas?


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Post #116627
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Good.


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Hey! The spoiler works! And thanks, how to do a war of succession though... any ideas, anyone?


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A coup, or perhaps a mutiny-esque idea?


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I was thinking maybe Ulfric had a son who was all brawn, no brains, brought Skyrim back into the Empire as part of an alliance to fight the elves. Both sides were weakened leading to the rise of warlords, all PCs would be warlords of a city and the area around it. Or maybe an ASOIAF type thing (I just started reading A Game of Thrones and love it, highly recommend it). Although, yours would be good too, how to implement it though.


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There's a few IRL coups that have happened, especially during the medieval era search them up on the internet.


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Have they led to a major War of Succession? With multiple sides?


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One or two likely have.


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I'll check it out tomorrow, its late where I am.


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Would this war span the whole of Tamriel or just a select few provinces?


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I'm thinking of doing an IC book about theft and ways to steal


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i'm thinking all of Tamriel, although I would do just a few provinces

Muk, that would not be a bad idea.
This post was last modified: November 23rd 2013 05:54 AM by Ri'Do'Ja


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