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Started by Manarax
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Please feel to comment on my story, but do try to give constructive criticism.


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Tyûkjontû châtsatul nu midwan.
Midwanjontû châtsatul nu asha.
Ashajontû kotswinot itsu nuyak.
Wonoksh Qyâsik nun.
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I will try and do roughly a chapter a week but this is my first attempt at writing, so bear with me.


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Nwûl tash.
Dzwol shâsotkun.
Shâsotjontû châtsatul nu tyûk.
Tyûkjontû châtsatul nu midwan.
Midwanjontû châtsatul nu asha.
Ashajontû kotswinot itsu nuyak.
Wonoksh Qyâsik nun.
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I enjoyed it, depicts the life of a bard nicely, the haggling, deal making.




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Not over yet.

Thank you for the comment.
This post was last modified: May 29th 2013, 02:35 PM by Manarax


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Nwûl tash.
Dzwol shâsotkun.
Shâsotjontû châtsatul nu tyûk.
Tyûkjontû châtsatul nu midwan.
Midwanjontû châtsatul nu asha.
Ashajontû kotswinot itsu nuyak.
Wonoksh Qyâsik nun.
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