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Darchee Jaiil


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Race: Argonian

Firstname:Darchee

Surname:Jaiil

Title:-

Sex :Male

Age:28

Occupation:freelance adventurer aiding argonian army

Faction:Ebonheart Pact

Appearance: 1.80 m tall lillte bit muscular dark green skin yellow eyes and a scar near his left eye

Personality: friendly always willing to help out a fellow argonian somtimes obsessed over his hunt for knowledge. also a bit paranoid. and distrusts other races.

Social Background/Backstory:Darchee grew up in Helstrom. His father was a general in the argonian army and started his military career as a scout. His mother was a mage and alchemist working in the army healing the wounded and making poisens. Darchee was raised with the skills to become a exceptionally good guerilla warrior. learning combat with blades and bow from his father along with the art of stealth he could already handle himself in dangerous situation. His mither taught him how to cast illusion spells increasing his abilities to hide in the shadows. He also learned how to make potions and moisen from his mother. As a child he spent most of his time reading books and learning about other cultures and war and becoming a great military tactician. Besides wanting to get a military career started he also started a little hunt for knowlegde wanting to know things other didn't. When he was 8 years old he was attcked by a crocodile he was able to kill it with a rock but was left with a scar at his left eye. he also had 2 realy good friends in helstrom Beech Ja and Daicheena Chavii Beech shared his hatching day with him and became a powerfull conjurer and studied the deadra. Daicheena was a couple mothes younger and was born in a village north of Helstrom when she was 7 the village was attacked by a group of dunmer vampires in the attack her mother was killed after that they moved to Helstrom. since that day she has hated both the dunmer and vampires. also because of that she wanted to be able to protect the ones she held dear to her so she started using heavy armor and a war axe along with destruction magic. one day Beech was some how able to open a portal to the Shivering Isles and we decided to go explore it together Daicheena went in first then Beech followed but as soon as he went through the portal closed and Darchee was left alone.

Best Memory: the first time reading a book

Worst Memory: Losing his friends

Skills: Dual-Wielding short sword and daggers, Archery, Stealth, Light Armor, Alchemy, Illusion magic, The art of Speech

Weaknesses: He often tends to get a bit obsessed with his hunt for knowledge. He is often overly paranoid. His distrust of the other members of the Ebonheart Pact.

Challenges for the Character: Finding a way to see his friends again. Overcoming his distrust of the other member of the Pact.

Birthsign: The Serpent

Religious Views: He never really was one to pray for the help of some all knowing god and did not trust those more powerfull than himself

Politics Views: He stands where his family has always stood at the side of the Hist. He does not like the argonians being part of the Ebonheart Pact and only accepts it because the hist does.

Favorite drinks: Wine and Herbal Tea

Favorite food: Steamed Mudcrab

Favorite book: The Blessings of Sheogorath, author unknown

For Our Lord Sheogorath, without Whom all Thought would be linear and all Feeling would be fleeting.
Blessed are the Madmen, for they hold the keys to secret knowledge.
Blessed are the Phobic, always wary of that which would do them harm.
Blessed are the Obsessed, for their courses are clear.
Blessed are the Addicts, may they quench the thirst that never ebbs.
Blessed are the Murderous, for they have found beauty in the grotesque.
Blessed are the Firelovers, for their hearts are always warm.
Blessed are the Artists, for in their hands the impossible is made real.
Blessed are the Musicians, for in their ears they hear the music of the soul.
Blessed are the Sleepless, as they bask in wakeful dreaming.
Blessed are the Paranoid, ever-watchful for our enemies.
Blessed are the Visionaries, for their eyes see what might be.
Blessed are the Painlovers, for in their suffering, we grow stronger.
Blessed is the Madgod, who tricks us when we are foolish, punishes us when we are wrong, tortures us when we are unmindful, and loves us in our imperfection.

He likes the book because it matches his birthsign The Serpent.
Those born under the sign of the Serpent are the most blessed and the most cursed.
Also because in reminds it of his friends who are in the Shivering Isles.
This post was last modified: March 17th 2013, 01:59 AM by Darchee Jaiil


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*gasp* you have left challenges for the character blank! this is the best part! here you get to decide what type of journey your character goes on it tell me what your character is and what he will become!

i would think of three. one social, one emotional and one physical
i can see a glaring potential for a social. he is a argoinian patriot and what the dunmer are doing to argonians to morrowind will be a massive challenge for him.

also this is just me but i would re frame from using the word 'one of the best' it not as bad as saying something like 'my character is the best sword fighter ' but i feel it comes pretty close.

finally weaknesses (i dont wanna sound nasty) but i couldn't care about strengths! i've seen all possible strengths on these character bio forums and they bore me :P now a good weakness! thats exciting! it makes me think 'how is your character going to do this challenge when he has a weakness like 'X'',
a good story is a character achieving his or her goals (or in some cases not achieving) while going through a challenge, this is normally a weakness of the character and they develop while overcoming said challenge!

ok now onto the good ^-^, obv i love a fellow argonian! and that he seems a recluse from the other races. you have weaknesses and challenges with in this bio i just need to see them :) good draft i would like to see this character develop
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(March 16th 2013, 03:07 PM)quib Wrote: *gasp* you have left challenges for the character blank! this is the best part! here you get to decide what type of journey your character goes on it tell me what your character is and what he will become!

i would think of three. one social, one emotional and one physical
i can see a glaring potential for a social. he is a argoinian patriot and what the dunmer are doing to argonians to morrowind will be a massive challenge for him.

also this is just me but i would re frame from using the word 'one of the best' it not as bad as saying something like 'my character is the best sword fighter ' but i feel it comes pretty close.

finally weaknesses (i dont wanna sound nasty) but i couldn't care about strengths! i've seen all possible strengths on these character bio forums and they bore me :P now a good weakness! thats exciting! it makes me think 'how is your character going to do this challenge when he has a weakness like 'X'',
a good story is a character achieving his or her goals (or in some cases not achieving) while going through a challenge, this is normally a weakness of the character and they develop while overcoming said challenge!

ok now onto the good ^-^, obv i love a fellow argonian! and that he seems a recluse from the other races. you have weaknesses and challenges with in this bio i just need to see them :) good draft i would like to see this character develop

i changed his background a little bit and also his worst memory and i gave him a personal challege

thanks for the advise


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fantastic :) you had hints of what your character was and is much clearer now. i look forward to see this character grow and develop :)
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