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Do'zakar


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Firstname-Do'zakar

Surname-Doesn't have one

Sex-Male

Race-Khajiit/Werewolf

Age-40

Height-7'8-8'

Subspecies-Cathay Raht.

Occupation-Mercenary, smuggler, warrior-monk.

Faction-Whoever pays the most (Aldmeri Dominion)

Appearance-Steel colored fur with black forearms and circle patterns covering his features, ears pierced with gold rings and hair done in braids with more gold rings at the ends, and has a thin mustache and beard along his jawline with golden beads and his body looks similar to a Jaguar or lion, Wears a simple pair of pants, boots, and vest made from the hide of a great boar he killed once, sometimes wears a robe the colour of the deserts of Anequina or a hooded cloak black/dark green in colour matching the jungles of Pellitine. Lean and muscular with an athletic appearance but has his fair share of scars and jaguar like splotches patterning his body. Weapons of choice are usually his claws which are sharper then a standard sword and are the color of ebony or fights with two curved Akiviri war katanas he got from a mansion he had been hired to attack the lord of which had a fancy for Akiviri artifacts, sometimes wears ebony gauntlets enchanted to give stronger melee attacks.

Werewolf Appearance-Red irises and thick fur so black Nocturnal would be impressed, claws and fangs that would shame a Daedroth and purple-black skin beneath the fur. Considerably large in beast form even by werewolf standards because though he does not know it the werewolf he inherited the gift from was a pack alpha and a blessing he recieved.

Personality-Doesn't like the company of others for fear he may lose control and turn into a werewolf in public but this fear has lessened over time. Cautious and wary and sometimes paranoid suspecting he will be discovered as a werewolf and killed as a result only his very close friends and fellow werewolves know what he is, his enemy's know this too though not for long. He is addicted to adrenaline and will often hunt or put himself in danger for just this reason. He has a very low tolerance for prejudice against his kind and often has been jailed for fights resulting from this.

Backstory-Born to a caravan in Elsweyr he was raised in the trade but as he grew older he tired of all the haggling and negotiating prices and wares. On a trip to Senchal they happened across a group of nomad Kahjiit and Redguards deciding to travel to the city together with the caravan Do'zakar heard that they trained martial arts and swordplay. Eager for change in his life he traveled across the province with them and trained in said skills day and night for 15 years until he was very experienced he took the Do' prefix upon completing his training and parted company with the nomads to settle in the city of Senchal which was the closest he had had to a home as the caravan used to stop frequently there for moonsugar. Although this quickly turned bad as he realized he had no money because the nomads were completely self-sufficient and didn't use currency, so he learned to smuggle sugar and skooma he felt ashamed at this and it hurt his pride badly but he got by and had a lot of skill bartering from his time in the caravan. He made trips all across Tamriel and his training proved helpful many times, fighting off bandits or thugs hired by the buyer to kill him and get the substances for free. On one trip to Balmora by sea the buyer demanded a lower cost for the sugar and when the offer was refused turned into a werewolf and wounded him badly, but Do'zakar was swift and managed to stab the beast to death only later realizing the beast's blood had seeped into his wounds and made him a werewolf too. When he did realize he was a werewolf he felt a strange joy at having such strength, he was strong as a Kahjiit but more so as a wolf with his new strength he became a mercenary travelling Tamriel. Though his beast form was powerful and he learned much about controlling it form fellow werewolves and personal experience he never stopped practicing his swordsmanship and martial arts. He had once encountered a group of worshipers of Hircine they recognized him as a werewolf and offered him a blessing of Hircine if he could find and kill the princes giant boar which was a sacred symbol of him and only appeared in times of strife and war. Funny enough he had been hired to kill a giant boar that had been murdering passing travelers and guard patrols, setting off to find this beast he fond it wasn't hard to find, all he had to do was follow the blood and finding it standing almost as tall as him and almost twice as wide with tusks that could flip a fishing boat. The boar almost killed him several times and would have had it not been for his inherent agility and speed finding the boars hide too tough to do any significant damage, he managed to duck under the beast and stab it's underbelly and killed it. He took the boars hide, hooves and tusks as trophy's and proof of the deed and received a blessing from the leader of the cult that made him able to shift in and out of his beast form numerous times a day, this only worried Do'zakar though as he could now turn by accident in public regardless of his having turned before that day, a worry that still troubles him.

Best memory-Training with the nomads.

Worst memory-being forced to smuggling to get by.

Skills-Martial arts and blade master and is very fast and agile. Also gets a bloodlust whenever he gets in a long fight in either beast or regular form where he fights viciously and barely feels pain. Also is stronger than most werewolves because of the blessing.

Challenges-to overcome his paranoia of being killed for being a werewolf and accidentally losing control though he can control himself well and to interact more with others which he avoids due to his time with the nomads.

Birthsign-Steed

Political views-doesn't care aslong as he gets paid.

Religious views-Follows prince Hircine.

Rumors:

Some say Do'zakar has a tendency to seal sweet rolls if they are left unattended.

Do'zakar was once cheated out of a deal with a fort full of bandits and he shot them all in the knees.

"Have you seen that Khajiit from Elsweyr? he uses curved swords CURVED SWORDS.
This post was last modified: September 22nd 2013, 12:35 PM by Took an arrow in the knee


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I have to say, I really like this bio, especially his werewolf appearance, "...thick fur so black Nocturnal would be impressed..." Really good! I think the only thing you could improve on is adding a bit more detail to everything, especially his personality, looks and backstory! 1st like for you ;). Also, is this your main character or an alt?


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Thanks for the like! I enjoy describing him but I'm not that great at detail so I'll change that later, and he is an alt.

Edited it could still use more though.
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Really good having been updated, just one problem. All you need to do is delete one of the, "And he took the prefix Do'" Because you have that in twice ;). Oh, also, I'd love to see some physical challenges, so what does he struggle with physically/what does he struggle to fight/is he scared of anything? Otherwise, really good.


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(August 26th 2013, 03:24 AM)Miasmador Wrote: Really good having been updated, just one problem. All you need to do is delete one of the, "And he took the prefix Do'" Because you have that in twice ;). Oh, also, I'd love to see some physical challenges, so what does he struggle with physically/what does he struggle to fight/is he scared of anything? Otherwise, really good.


Thanks for the advice Miasmador! I had completely forgotten that I added the prefix thing twice. He is scared of being discovered as a werewolf or losing control of his ability and he struggles to socialize because he spent a lot of time with the nomads (changed it to 15 years) but future updates will come.


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Edited him some more.


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Added a few rumors, more on the way I'm just lazy right now.


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This one enjoyed this bio very much. Its great to see another strong-arm of the skooma trade, though how we came to be in that position is vastly different. Great to see how many unique stories can exist in the same universe and makes it feel more real. The description of the werewolf form is really neat too and sounds menacing.

One thing though that just is bugging me to no end. you misspelled Khajiit in the "Race" section


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This one is grateful for the complements fellow Khajiit and has fixed grammatical error.


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I always like to read a khajiit warrior bio! I just wanted to suggest one thing, the Cathay "possess greater stature and strength" according to uesp. I think that fits your character well as a warrior, but he is listed at just 6ft tall so it is kind of contradicting.


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(September 11th 2013, 08:27 AM)Grape Drank Wrote: I always like to read a khajiit warrior bio! I just wanted to suggest one thing, the Cathay "possess greater stature and strength" according to uesp. I think that fits your character well as a warrior, but he is listed at just 6ft tall so it is kind of contradicting.


Thanks Grape! I intend to change the hight soon but I cant find a source that gives a good estimate of the hight, if you have any suggestions as a fellow Khajiit I would be happy to edit his height.


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Well I couldn't find a good source either, but I made my khajiit 6'7" to be as tall as most Altmer. I think I remember reading something that the Cathay were just as tall as them at any rate.
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Thanks, I believe Ragnar ice-blood said something about them being 7'-7'10 if I may quote him.

I'll change that soon when I finish the rumours.
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My khajiit is about 6' tall (my height). Do'Rakk had fought a cathay breed Khajiit called "The Tower." In my story he stands almost 8' tall


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Thanks, I read the story, is The Tower abnormally tall or not? because if so then maybe that would be around average height for the Cathay-Raht.


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