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Fjor Snow-Side


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Firstname - Fjor
Surname - Snow-Side
title - Housecarl
Sex - Male
Age - 19
Race- Nord
Occupation - Former housecarl, Agent of the Seeker
Faction - Daggerfall Covenant
Appearance - Snowy haired with piercing blue eyes. Ruggedly handsome and built like an Orc.
Personality - Awkward, conservative, slightly timid. Not a people person. Often comes off as hostile. Warm, fiercely loyal, and loving to those close to him.
Social Background/Backstory - grew up a farm boy in Falkreath Hold in southern Skyrim. Born to Anisse Snow-Side a nord woman and Fulthor Ashing a breton from the Reach. His mother was strict and spoke much of Honor and purpose, like most most nords. His father however was good man and cared much for his family but was cowardly. Fulthor was cheap as there wasnt much money to be had in Falkreath, and rarely bought anything nice for he family. His life was average in every way until we was 16 years old, when to strangers lived with him and his family for three months. It was in this time he met Ria Long-Finger, an Imperial female a year his junior. In the three months that they had stayed with Fjor's family, the Long-Fingers did all they could for their hosts. Ria tutored Fjor in restoration magic as it was the only school Anisse approved of. This brought Ria and Fjor very close. The two had a brief relationship ending when Ria left with her brother Solduiran for Winterhold. A month had past before he was informed that he would be receiving military training by request of Falkreath's in hopes of becoming a housecarl to the Jarl. His mother had pleaded with the Jarl to let Fjor become a thane. The Jarl unfortunately couldn't do that, but he did do what he could. Anisse Snow-side was satisfied at this as it would give honor to the Snow-Side name. Anisse was dying of a severe case of rattles and it brought her peace of mind knowing her son would the family name honor once again. Fjor would leave with in the week. Two and a half years he would spend training. When he would return he found the family had been sold. Upon further investigation he learned that his mother had died only a month after he had left and his father had become a drunk. His father Fulthor Ashing sold the Farm and used the money to return to High rock. The affect that had on him was catastrophic. Alone, angry, scared, and grieving he took shelter with the Jarl working as a guard. Fjor didn't have much to time to dwell because in two months time he was contacted by an old love Ria. He met her in Whiterun. The two had changed a lot sinsce the last time they had last seen one another.

They had a rather bad and loud falling out in the middle of the Whiterun marketplace that left Ria crying and Fjor confused. Ria had come to see him in hopes of persuading him to become a mage. Fjor commented that he no longer saw the practicality of magic, as it destroyed so much.

Ria screamed at Fjor saying that, "he was just like every Nord man."
Fjor would be infuriated by this, "what was that supposed to mean!"
"So do you not trust me anymore!? Am I a killer!? I practice magic so I can defend myself! You use a shield! I use magic!"
"Yes but my shield can't turn a man invisible or burn down a building!"
"You ass! You know that isn't true!"
"No it is and you know it!"
"I hope you rot in Oblivion Fjor Snow-Side!" Ria ran from the marketplace sobbing. Fjor was mad but heart broken and wondered what he did wrong.

Solduiran when hearing about this was shocked that the two of them had broken away from each other. Ria's older brother wasn't the type to hold grudges or really hate much of anything. Fjor feared his backlash but it never came. Solduiran knew that Fjor was cautious and magic was volatile at best as Solduiran's mother had been a Battlemage and he too practiced magic. Solduiran sent him a letter saying that Ria had come to him explained what had happened and that despite initially being a little upset that Solduiran knew that Fjor had his reasons for not trusting magic. It was a relief that also brought on the full effect of his heartbreak. But again this wouldn't last long as Solduiran would surprise him with a visit and a promise of adventure.
Best Memory - his first love
Worst Memory - first break up.
Skills - Standard military and Housecarl weapons training.
Challenges for the Character - he is socially inept and has major trust issues. He doesn't like people so he hates most strangers and is a little racist out of Fear. Though this is due to his want to stay alive. He can count on himself but has a hard time letting others help after what his father did.
Birthsign - Atronach
Religious Views - Holds deep reverence for the eight divines.
This post was last modified: April 7th 2013, 12:58 PM by Solduiran Long-Finger


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Fjor is a great character, I love interacting with him in RP.


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I wanted a warrior class character but I wanted him to be very different from the classic knight in shining armor. And I must admit I did kind of base a few of his things so he might lend himself to being Idaina's friend or more than that, as I really like Idaina as a character, especially after reading her backstory.


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Thank you


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(April 5th 2013, 08:03 PM)I. Acha Wrote: Thank you

I actually ment to ask you about what you thought the relationship between the characters should or would be


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I think that it could be interesting if the characters would have a deeper relationship.


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(April 5th 2013, 07:56 PM)Solduiran Long-Finger Wrote: I wanted a warrior class character but I wanted him to be very different from the classic knight in shining armor. And I must admit I did kind of base a few of his things so he might lend himself to being Idaina's friend or more than that, as I really like Idaina as a character, especially after reading her backstory.

Nice character really interesting our chars might could be great friends :D


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He identify's more with Bretons despite being a Nord himself. His father was a Breton. So he will more than likely will be.


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ok you have written the general direction for your character and have made love an aspect to your story, an aspect i feel is too few on these forums so well done :).

i'm liking the story, how your character meets a lovely girl, gets separated D: and when they meet up it all falls apart! love that part but i feel you should expand on this. why did they have a falling out? did Ria not like what Fjor had become? was Fjor under a lot of stress (due to the death of his mother and his father becoming a drunk)? maybe some other reason. basically seeing though this is a big part of your story you should expand on it.

talking about your mother, too many people do this so your not the first :P, is that the first time they mention their parents is when they die, it's hard to care for someone who we only have half a sentence talking about, also you don't explain how your character felt after he came back home only to see things fall apart.

When you say that Ria's older brother offers you a promise of adventure what exactly do you mean? i know if someone broke my sisters heart i would hit them! but that is just me :P it just doesn't seem logical that her older brother of all people offers you an adventure! maybe he was a good friend of yours?

for skills, he has received 'Standard military and Housecarl weapons training.' which is good but you should expand of this, did he pass his training with flying colours? is he a weak fighter even after getting training? i think you should expand on challenges too! you have thought of some good ones as well but tell me how these challenges affect his life :)

pretty good character. well done. i look forward in seeing this character expand :)


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Okay, I will all of that some thought I will update it. Thank you Quib! I try to have it come soon. Thank you :)


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i look forward to the update buddy :)


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I have it updated I think I have gotten everything. But I am prone to missing things


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much much better! your character is much clearer. good work ^-^


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