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Giraud Bellamont


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Name: Giraud Bellamont

Race: Breton

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Height: 5,9 feet

build: normally built.

appaerance: Brown hair, green-blue Eyes and a small beard. He is normally built but he is pretty thin.

Occupation: Alators apprentice

Strenghts: He has like Alator a good heart and is intelligent even for a Breton.

Skills: Adept in all the schools exept Illusion wich he doesnt use. He is also normally good with a sword. But he has a natural affinity for alchemy and enjoys to experiment with ingredients.

Best memory: Being accepted as Alators apprentice.

Weaknesses: He hates to take lives but can do it if he needs to. He is shy and when he becomes it he isnt good at talking, wich is a big problem for him since he is the apprentice of a famous wizard. He is pretty weak and has trouble trusting people exept Alator.

Worst memory: His parents Death.

Loves: Magic and Peace.

Hates: Theives and greedy people.

Social background: Giraud was born in Wayrest were his father Uthyn worked as a shopkeeper of magical artifacts. His father like the most Bretons were Highly intelligent and made sure he got Education as soon as they saw that he had the gifts of magic. They discovered it when Giraud at the age of six had lifted down one of his toys with magic when he couldnt reach it.

His parents thought it was good that he clearly had potential of becoming a good mage and his father started teaching him the base knowledge of magic so that he atleast could be mediocre. To learn all that took four years, since his father had to tend the shop. But one night when he was ten. They woke up by a noice, it were robbers in their house. His father and mother because they were both mages and could defend themselves atleast a bit, went down and soon Giraud Heard screams and the sound of spells being casted. But the sounds ended after a sound of a bow being fired two times. Giraud Went down and saw that it was five dead robbers and his parents pierced by Arrows was lying on the floor and that two robbers still was alive. One of them ran after himand Giraud jumped out through a window. He ran to a guard and told him Crying what had happened.

The guard led him to the barracks were he got to sleep and got food. The next day they took him to Emeric to decide what should become of him. Since he had the gift of magic as many Bretons they decided that he should get an apprenticeship, so they looked after who wanted an apprentice. Giraud saw that Alator Virane the great wizard from Daggerfall who was famous in all of High Rock was looking for one in Daggerfall, and Giraud decided that he should try to become Alators apprentice.

So the next day he took a wagon to Daggerfall, he still remembered the first veiw of Daggerfall and his amazement of its size. When they reached the huge gates, he jumped off and thanked the wagon-driver and headed in. He walked the streets and enjoyed the smells of the food, the voices when traders sold things and the magic and wizards that was everywere. Afetr an hour he finally found the house were Alator had the tests for being his apprentice. It was a long line and it took hours Before it was Girauds turn. He walked in and saw that Alator himself sat on a chair at the end of a huge room. "He looks like a king." thought Giraud and became a Little shy. Then said Alator with his euphonious and authoritative voice "And who are you who seeks to be my apprentice?" Giraud answered "Im Giraud Bellamont." First Alator gave him eight pieces that could be put togheter to form a ring, as a test of intelligence. Then he teached Giraud some spells and made him use them to see how fast he could learn. Then he teached Giraud telenekis and made him hold up a Dwemer cog as long as he could to try his strength. Then finally he asked some questions wich should try his wisdom. When they were done Giraud asked if he had made it. Alator just gave him a mysterious smile and said "you will see tomorrow." That night he slept bad because he thought at what would happen with him. The next day Giraud stood on the market were Alator should tell who he chose. Alator walked up on a platform and said "I have thinked of this and considered a lot and know i kow wich one of you I want as my apprentice. I chose, Giraud Bellamont come up here." Giraud got tears of pride in his Eyes when he walked up while getting cheered and congratulated by the others. Alator gave him a necklace of gold with a sapphire Eye on and said "I hope you will learn all that takes to be a good mage, welcome my apprentice. I looked out over the people and thought that i had got a home again.

Alator took Giraud up in the Mountains, after Three Days they reached Alators home. It was a small castle built in White stone near the top of a mountain, the castle itself wasnt so large for a castle, but it had a very large and high Tower. Giraud stood as stunned when he saw the veiw over a valley, Alator laughed and said "Are you going to stand there or are you going to follow me?" Giraud smiled a Little shy and followed Alator. They soon reached the gate were a Young woman in robes stood. Alator said "This is Colette, she was my apprentice Before you and watches over my home when im gone." then he nodded against Colette and said "Thank you again for watching over my home." Alator walked inside but when Giraud was about to walk in he bumped right into an invisible wall, when he touched it it glowed in a blue light. Alator smiled and said "Sorry, thats just one of my houses protections i´ll change the spell so that you can enter." Then Alator changed it and Giraud stepped in. Giraud walked and looked around in the house, the hallway was large and had a fountain in it. The library had two floors full with Bookshelfs, that had so much books in it they could have. It was mostly books about lore and magic. Alators bedroom was large and you could see the valley and some mountains from a large window. Girauds bedroom was smaller but had a window too.

The first thing Giraud found out was that Alator didnt allow mistakes, at all. Giraud had trouble with Learning enchanting. It felt so hard to bind spell of some kind into items! Alator often took him out on journeys on the Mountains. But one time they were assaulted by bandits, they were Three of them and they were no match for the mages. But that were the first time Giraud took a Life. And he hated it, but he knew it was necessary.
This post was last modified: May 25th 2013, 11:59 PM by Archmage Alator


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Hello Alator. I think you have the basics of your character here but things are a bit ... basic. You have the foundations for you character but i think you can flesh him out a bit more :). Just explain his appearance a bit more and stuff like that.

He seems like he's a bit of a goodie two shoes, he loves magic and peace and hates Theives and greed. Now this isn't a bad thing, in fact i think i can be the best aspect of your character. As we know the world isn't all rainbows and butterflies, so your character can be conflicted with later choices. He loves magic and peace but what happens if he is forced to use magic for conflict? I would keep him a goodie 2 shoes and make this his weakness. Make him have a shock when he sees the ugliness of the world for the first time. Will this character do the right choice no matter what? what would he sacrifice to do the right thing?

I think you should add some strengths for this character (its rare i say that) but he seems a bit meek like he's just there to be in contrast to Alator. he must have something special if Alator chose him to train. :P (infact i would make him better than Alator in some ways)

A good first draft Alator :), just need stuff added to it and i bet we can make him a pretty interesting character ^-^


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(May 11th 2013, 02:56 AM)quib Wrote: Hello Alator. I think you have the basics of your character here but things are a bit ... basic. You have the foundations for you character but i think you can flesh him out a bit more :). Just explain his appearance a bit more and stuff like that.

He seems like he's a bit of a goodie two shoes, he loves magic and peace and hates Theives and greed. Now this isn't a bad thing, in fact i think i can be the best aspect of your character. As we know the world isn't all rainbows and butterflies, so your character can be conflicted with later choices. He loves magic and peace but what happens if he is forced to use magic for conflict? I would keep him a goodie 2 shoes and make this his weakness. Make him have a shock when he sees the ugliness of the world for the first time. Will this character do the right choice no matter what? what would he sacrifice to do the right thing?

I think you should add some strengths for this character (its rare i say that) but he seems a bit meek like he's just there to be in contrast to Alator. he must have something special if Alator chose him to train. :P (infact i would make him better than Alator in some ways)

A good first draft Alator :), just need stuff added to it and i bet we can make him a pretty interesting character ^-^

I will add some more stuff to it and develop and add some new weaknesses, thanks for the feedback :D


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(May 11th 2013, 02:56 AM)quib Wrote: Hello Alator. I think you have the basics of your character here but things are a bit ... basic. You have the foundations for you character but i think you can flesh him out a bit more :). Just explain his appearance a bit more and stuff like that.

He seems like he's a bit of a goodie two shoes, he loves magic and peace and hates Theives and greed. Now this isn't a bad thing, in fact i think i can be the best aspect of your character. As we know the world isn't all rainbows and butterflies, so your character can be conflicted with later choices. He loves magic and peace but what happens if he is forced to use magic for conflict? I would keep him a goodie 2 shoes and make this his weakness. Make him have a shock when he sees the ugliness of the world for the first time. Will this character do the right choice no matter what? what would he sacrifice to do the right thing?

I think you should add some strengths for this character (its rare i say that) but he seems a bit meek like he's just there to be in contrast to Alator. he must have something special if Alator chose him to train. :P (infact i would make him better than Alator in some ways)

A good first draft Alator :), just need stuff added to it and i bet we can make him a pretty interesting character ^-^

Now he is officially weak Xp

I will figure out new things to add soon.


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(May 11th 2013, 02:56 AM)quib Wrote: Hello Alator. I think you have the basics of your character here but things are a bit ... basic. You have the foundations for you character but i think you can flesh him out a bit more :). Just explain his appearance a bit more and stuff like that.

He seems like he's a bit of a goodie two shoes, he loves magic and peace and hates Theives and greed. Now this isn't a bad thing, in fact i think i can be the best aspect of your character. As we know the world isn't all rainbows and butterflies, so your character can be conflicted with later choices. He loves magic and peace but what happens if he is forced to use magic for conflict? I would keep him a goodie 2 shoes and make this his weakness. Make him have a shock when he sees the ugliness of the world for the first time. Will this character do the right choice no matter what? what would he sacrifice to do the right thing?

I think you should add some strengths for this character (its rare i say that) but he seems a bit meek like he's just there to be in contrast to Alator. he must have something special if Alator chose him to train. :P (infact i would make him better than Alator in some ways)

A good first draft Alator :), just need stuff added to it and i bet we can make him a pretty interesting character ^-^

I have added his first time in Alators house. Much more is following XD


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(May 11th 2013, 02:56 AM)quib Wrote: Hello Alator. I think you have the basics of your character here but things are a bit ... basic. You have the foundations for you character but i think you can flesh him out a bit more :). Just explain his appearance a bit more and stuff like that.

He seems like he's a bit of a goodie two shoes, he loves magic and peace and hates Theives and greed. Now this isn't a bad thing, in fact i think i can be the best aspect of your character. As we know the world isn't all rainbows and butterflies, so your character can be conflicted with later choices. He loves magic and peace but what happens if he is forced to use magic for conflict? I would keep him a goodie 2 shoes and make this his weakness. Make him have a shock when he sees the ugliness of the world for the first time. Will this character do the right choice no matter what? what would he sacrifice to do the right thing?

I think you should add some strengths for this character (its rare i say that) but he seems a bit meek like he's just there to be in contrast to Alator. he must have something special if Alator chose him to train. :P (infact i would make him better than Alator in some ways)

A good first draft Alator :), just need stuff added to it and i bet we can make him a pretty interesting character ^-^

I have added how he took a lifefor the first time....


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