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Heceril


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Firstname -Heceril

Race - Altmer

title - None

Sex - Male

Age - Unknown

Occupation - Used to be a knight until he became a vampire lord.

Faction - None

Appearance (Altmer) - Very light golden skin,very tall, Light Green eyes. Wears dark robes that has a faded and torn emblem of the Aldmeri Dominion.Fairly short Ash Blond hair which he puts to the side and and a small beard which he keeps neat and tidy.

Appearance (Vampire)- Wears dark cloth to cover up genitals. Wings have torn cloth hanging from them. Paler than most Vampire lords. White hair.

Personality - Quiet but gets problems with patients and anger. Prefers to keep to himself and perform his study...and hunting.

Social Background/Backstory - Born on the Summerset isles to a noble. He later became a knight in the army of the Aldmeri Dominion. He commanded a unit of soldiers. During his service he took pleasure in experimenting with the prisoners. He got so obsessed with his experiments. But he was suffering from a disease which shortened his long Altmer life span to only 70 years. This was nothing to him a flash and then eternal darkness. He was an Altmer a race that lived 1000 years and he was cursed by the gods to live only 70. It would be like being born only to die a day later not witnessing the beauties of the world. He cursed the Eight every day he woke up. He began to study the topic of prolonging life with no results. No book could help him the disease was incurable and there were no answers. He was in his commanders tent when he stumbled upon the book of daedra. He did not know much about the daedra and he was tired of reading about his doom. He opened up at a random page and he saw the name Molag Bal the prince of Rape. He began to quickly read over the pages and he quite clearly read out the word immortality. His face became bright at the word. Such a sweet word Immortality he could repeat it over and over again in his head. Immortality his smile grew wider. He sat at his desk all night reading about the gift of vampirism that is gifted to certain individuals by Molag Bal. Then he read about this perfect word having it's consequences. His smile faded and he became pale again. He stopped eating and drinking spending long nights in his thoughts. Was his own immortality worth the price. He remembered his early childhood when his father taught him a important lesson. " One dies when his time has come, we all have these times and you are not in the right to change this time. Only the Gods can decide the fate of all" Maybe his father was right he thought. "NO!" He said loudly that night. The Gods had cursed him for no reason the more he thought of it the angrier he became. I'm in the right to deny the gods he thought. That night he set up a shrine to the prince of Rape and summoned him just as the book told him to do. He lay on his knees begging Molag Bal weeping for him to gift him Immortality. Molag Bal told him of the price which Heceril through tears accepted. Molag Bal commanded him to complete the blood price that same day and he would be reborn. But the prince warned Heceril for if he were not to complete the price he would die that same day. Heceril lost control he could not come to do it this was his unit his pride and joy his inherited group of soldiers from his father. But death was worse than loss of honor. He completed the blood price after which he crawled into a corner and began to cry salty tears. Heceril died the next night only to be reborn as a immortal vampire lord. He had changed from one curse to another. He now had to stalk the night looking for prey to appease his growing hunger and to appease the blood price for Molag Bal his lord and savior. This curse hurts him but not as much as the fact that the gods looked away from him and cursed him until Molag Bal took him under his wing. At first he refused to feed hating the idea of it. In a week without feeding he was walking past a lake and looked at himself in the reflection. He stumbled back. He was horrified at what he had become he looked like a being from Oblivion he hid his face in shame. He had to feed the blood lust grew. He entered a village near the Town of Anvil looking for easy prey. He met a fine young woman and quickly he felt feelings for her. That night he appeased his pleasure and fed on her blood. He took her unconscious body to a cave and for weeks raped and fed on her until she died. He could not believe what he had done the young woman had a whole life ahead of her and he took it with a click of his fingers. He sat in his cave remembering her face laughing at his jokes as they sat in darkness near a lake his face covered. She loved how mysterious he was until she saw his face. Blood was a addiction now he wanted more and so he traveled to Anvil and took drunken beggars to his den. After a Month he missed the sun it's beautiful rays lighting the world with happiness. He tried to walk outside into the sun. His blood boiled and skin burnt until he bled. He was truly cursed to be a reaper of death that stalked the night. He traveled to Skyrim and made a cave near Windhelm his home. It had both protection warmth and a supply of blood which he so desperately needed. He lost emotion on the third month. The blood lust was like work now he did it without thought. He began to master control over his Vampire lord form. He realised that the blood lust was more intense in the lord form but he was an animal. He could fly float and kill without remorse. He could grasp the vampire lord form now but still could not control it at times.


Worst Memory - The way he completed the blood price. The faces of his friends will haunt him until the end of time. He takes no pleasure in the acts he must do and the acts he has performed in the past.

Skills - Heceril is known for being a great Battlemage. A great Swordsman and a great mage. He is well known for creating cures for diseases others deemed incurable due to his...experiments.

Challenges for the Character - The faces of his friends still haunt him. He wishes to return back to Summerset but is afraid of seeing his family and friends. Since he could easily have ended their lives. He has understood that he is cursed for eternity to never see home never to love never to feel emotion. His sole duty was to kill and feed.

Birthsign - The Mage

Religious Views - Heceril worships Molag Bal due to their interests meeting and his debt to the Deadra lord.
This post was last modified: April 5th 2013, 07:05 PM by Plague_Walrus


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Hurray! a vampire ^-^ nice to see something other than a werewolf ... of which i am guilty of :P. there is one part of the story that i would love for you to expand on! i love the fact that you gave him a disease and that made him desperate, so much so infact he dicided to contact the king of rape himself! (which is pretty damn desperate!) but this is the parts i would like you to expand on. expand on his depravity! it's going to be hard to do so some what because he's desperate because he now has a life span of 70. something that comes naturally to humans ... and it's only going to be us humans reading this bio so it's going to be harder for us to relate (but not impossible!). next expand on the tasks. to be honest i don't wanna know what Bal made your character do :P and i think you shouldn't mention exactly how Hecril acquires the souls or what he does to them! hint it by all means! but leave it to our imaginations! Instead tell us how he felt. show us how desperate he was to do these awful acts! did he know that immortality came with such a price (being vampirism) how did he cope?

this is a good first draft and i think you have something pretty interesting here! i look forward into seeing this character grow and expand! well done friend :D


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(April 5th 2013, 02:46 AM)quib Wrote: Hurray! a vampire ^-^ nice to see something other than a werewolf ... of which i am guilty of :P. there is one part of the story that i would love for you to expand on! i love the fact that you gave him a disease and that made him desperate, so much so infact he dicided to contact the king of rape himself! (which is pretty damn desperate!) but this is the parts i would like you to expand on. expand on his depravity! it's going to be hard to do so some what because he's desperate because he now has a life span of 70. something that comes naturally to humans ... and it's only going to be us humans reading this bio so it's going to be harder for us to relate (but not impossible!). next expand on the tasks. to be honest i don't wanna know what Bal made your character do :P and i think you shouldn't mention exactly how Hecril acquires the souls or what he does to them! hint it by all means! but leave it to our imaginations! Instead tell us how he felt. show us how desperate he was to do these awful acts! did he know that immortality came with such a price (being vampirism) how did he cope?

this is a good first draft and i think you have something pretty interesting here! i look forward into seeing this character grow and expand! well done friend :D

Thanks Quib I value your opinions and suggestions as always. I will try my best to continue expanding here.


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(April 5th 2013, 03:53 AM)Plague_Walrus Wrote: Thanks Quib I value your opinions and suggestions as always. I will try my best to continue expanding here.

ah thanks man ^-^. and yeah try your best. you can only improve and think this character proves that! good luck :)


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As quib said, really good you have a vampire, there are far too many werewolves, they are just so popular! *Looks guilty*. The way he killed his friends and then felt guilty afterwards is really good, he isn't just some over powerful vampire lord that kills mindlessly, it adds a bit of depth to him. Yeah, really good, well done. :)


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(April 5th 2013, 03:58 AM)Miasmador Wrote: As quib said, really good you have a vampire, there are far too many werewolves, they are just so popular! *Looks guilty*. The way he killed his friends and then felt guilty afterwards is really good, he isn't just some over powerful vampire lord that kills mindlessly, it adds a bit of depth to him. Yeah, really good, well done. :)

Thank you =)


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(April 5th 2013, 03:56 AM)quib Wrote:
(April 5th 2013, 03:53 AM)Plague_Walrus Wrote: Thanks Quib I value your opinions and suggestions as always. I will try my best to continue expanding here.

ah thanks man ^-^. and yeah try your best. you can only improve and think this character proves that! good luck :)
Well I improved it as you suggested what do you think should I add/take away something?
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ok. i love! and i mean love that at first your character call vampirism a gift but at the end he names it a curse! i would like you to update this character and 'look after him' tbh i don't know any other character on this forum that is a vampire so you'll get quite a bit of freedoms in that respect.
how about mention the curse and life with it! maybe he didn't know you have to feed so after a few weeks becomes hideous! what was it like to feed for the first time? who was it? was it someone he knew? maybe it was a begger of which you feed off then killed! mention what it was like to be out in sun light!

i really envy you creating a vampire character ^-^. it's up to you know to make him truely epic. i look forward to reading every update and most of all. have fun creating this character.


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(April 5th 2013, 10:45 AM)quib Wrote: ok. i love! and i mean love that at first your character call vampirism a gift but at the end he names it a curse! i would like you to update this character and 'look after him' tbh i don't know any other character on this forum that is a vampire so you'll get quite a bit of freedoms in that respect.
how about mention the curse and life with it! maybe he didn't know you have to feed so after a few weeks becomes hideous! what was it like to feed for the first time? who was it? was it someone he knew? maybe it was a begger of which you feed off then killed! mention what it was like to be out in sun light!

i really envy you creating a vampire character ^-^. it's up to you know to make him truely epic. i look forward to reading every update and most of all. have fun creating this character.

Thanks a lot Quib =D I truly owe a lot of this to you without your suggestion and helpful advice I wouldn't have made him that good. Thank again =) Another Update.
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ok, yep you have defiantly made him a servant to bal haha, so he has became immortal but at the cost of his humanity ..... well 'elfity?' you know what i mean :P, very good theme


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Hehe. Experimenting on prisoners.


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