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Gender: Male

Name: Heru uur

Age: unknown

Birth sign: The Mage

Faction: Aldmeri Dominion

Place of residence:
Alinor - Summerset Isles

Family: N/A, his father and mother died and he had no brothers or sisters.

Occupation: Scribe for the mages guild

Personality: Aggressive, unfriendly, non-communicative and could be described as a demented elf - as a result of a traumatized childhood.

Skills: Destruction magic, conjuration, writing and the ability to make anyone around him feel depressed and inferior.

Hobbies: Destruction magic (especially giant fire balls of destruction), writing, slaying any form of evil - for avenging his father's death and perfecting his old magical friend - nartha.

Likes/Dislikes:
Dislikes: Humans - as he believes that they are inferior to elves,
demonic creatures - as they caused his fathers death and undead - as they remind him of the souls that torment his nightmares.
Likes: Destruction magic, summoning elementals - especially fire, slaying evil, precious magic objects and Sheogorath - his favorite Daedric Prince.

Weaponary Nartha - his trusty staff and two eleven daggers, concealed in his clothing.

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The creature was born in a time of despair; his father had fought in the wars of oblivion, a great mage, necessary for the ranks of the elite mages. He passed away, in combat… His mother was an eleven tailor, she designed the most beautiful clothes. Silken robes, embodied with patterns sacred to his kin; he wore them proudly, not for respect but because he truly liked them. But his happiness could not last. His mother fell ill, of a great sickness, one of the hearts… She had been preparing for this; for she knew too well that the time would come. Death would take her soul and place it into his collection. A last gift she gave. Oh – it was truly a masterpiece... Crimson silk robes, flowed like rivers of blood, embodied with jewels: ruby, sapphire and opal. The hood was marked with a symbol; the symbol for fire. Heru Uur was born.
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First Post - yay Smiling
This post was last modified: January 24th 2014, 11:14 AM by Heru uur


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Added: age, name, hobbies, likes/dislikes, special abilities, place of residence and background.
This post was last modified: January 23rd 2014, 09:31 AM by Heru uur


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A good bio, if a little short and lacking in detail.

A few problems though:

1. Lose the special abilities section. That's pretty OP not to mention rather impossible.

2. What wars of Oblivion?

3. Your backstory is a bit cryptic and it's more of a story belonging in the library than a backstory.

4. "Unknown" is not an age. If you put that because you can't think of an appropriate name then I'd be glad to help in that regard.

Also in my opinion Heru Uur sounds more like a Dunmer name than an Altmeri one. If you like I can provide examples of Altmer names.


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(January 23rd 2014, 03:57 PM)Took an arrow in the knee Wrote: A good bio, if a little short and lacking in detail.

A few problems though:

1. Lose the special abilities section. That's pretty OP not to mention rather impossible.

2. What wars of Oblivion?

3. Your backstory is a bit cryptic and it's more of a story belonging in the library than a backstory.

4. "Unknown" is not an age. If you put that because you can't think of an appropriate name then I'd be glad to help in that regard.

Also in my opinion Heru Uur sounds more like a Dunmer name than an Altmeri one. If you like I can provide examples of Altmer names.

Thanks, I will edit according to your comment. By the wars of oblivion I'm referring to the oblivion crises. I put unknown for the age, to make him seem more mysterious. Yes I would like some Altmer names thanks. Smiling


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The Oblivion crisis is hundreds of years after TESO... TESO takes place in the second era and the Oblivion crisis takes place in the third era... that's almost a thousand years if I'm not mistaken.

As for names here is a list of all Altmer names seen in TES series to date. I would not recommend directly copying any exact names but use them as examples.


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