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Idaina Acha


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Name: Idaina Acha
Race: Breton
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Background: Idaina was born in Daggerfall, to a wealthy merchant family. As a young girl, Idaina was more aware in a sense, more then most children or even adults. Her Father saw this as a sign that she would become a great importance to the world. Her father taught her history, literature, magic, alchemy, politics, economics, and the art of the blade. Idaina found work with the blade much more interesting then anything else. So she practiced and practiced for days' on end. At the age of 10, her mother and father were killed by a renegade of Orcs (this was before king Emeric created the peace treaty that ended fighting between the Bretons and the Orcs). She traveled to Windhelm, where her uncle was acting as the steward the the Jarl of Eastmarch. In Windhelm she meet a man by the name of Jorn Snow-Side, a blacksmith. He saw a "Fire" in her heart, so he offered to teach her how to put that "Fire" to a proper use. This training was long and hard, but the the results...were worth it. She would spend five long years training with Jorn. That all changed when the alliances' formed. Idaina and Jorn were spending the day at his home, because training was off that day. When their was a knock at the door. Jorn, before he answered the door, looked at Idaina and said, "we fight, so the fighting will stop". He then told her to hide, as he opened the door. There were two members of the Ebonheart Pact at the door. One Nord and one Dark Elf, they looked at him and the nord said, " Do you know the whereabouts of a 'Idaina Acha'?". Jorn looked at them and said, "I do, and you can't take her you bastards!". The nord proceeded to stab him in the chest, and he left him there to die. Idaina Traveled back to High Rock to aid the ending of the alliance war, she was 19 by the time she got back to High Rock. When asked why she wanted to join the Daggerfall Convenient, she looked right in the recruiters eyes and said, "I fight, so the fighting will stop".


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Dose anyone think I should make a longer and more in-depth story, even with one of your characters. Reply if you want to be in my story, and in witch way!


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(March 4th 2013, 03:45 PM)I. Acha Wrote: Dose anyone think I should make a longer and more in-depth story, even with one of your characters. Reply if you want to be in my story, and in witch way!

It is often enjoyable to create a longer and more in-depth story on a character you made! It also helps fleshing them out with more background, details, and nuances. I'd say go for it!

In terms of using other people's characters, I'm sure as they become more familiar with you they'd gladly be part of your story.


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Deep and complex stories are always great and help you know exactly how you want to portray and play out the character so go for it. I will admit I usually go all out or over the top so my opinion on the matter may be slanted. As for using other peoples characters in your story I would be interested in working with someone on something like that if the opportunity presents itself. =) nice story and good luck.


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I loved the story, though I dont think a Dunmer and a Nord would turn up together. I think they would try to keep the races as apart as possible because there is an enmity between them, even though they are allied


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I am defiantly create a new character bio soon, maybe tomorrow. That is defiantly longer and more detailed.


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Well wouldn't she have a grudge against the Orcs since they killed her family so you may want to go into that.


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Thank you for the feedback!


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Looking forward to reading it good luck.


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I'm just gonna say great bio, it is XD!


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The only thing it really needs is 'Views on the World'. So political and religous sort of thing. It just helps flesh out the character and shows what the experiences have done to them. But the story was very good.
And I really liked the repetition of "I fight so the fighting will stop."
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