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Ogrug-Gro Bludghul


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Given name -Ogrug

Family name -Gro Bludghul

Titles - None

Sex - Male

Age - 27

Race - Orc

Faction - Previously Royal Guard (Hammerfell) Currently: Bandits

Appearance - Tall, Heavy Build,Black Hair,Clean shave Blue Eyes. Wields two or one axes. Grey Skin.

Personality - Bitter and angered he has experienced many terrors leaving him with sociopathic tendencies. He is also a alcoholic taking hours in the brothels drowning himself in mead.

Social Background/Backstory - He was born in Orsinium. And as a young Orc his father taught him the art of war,training him how to wield an axe and defend himself. When he turned Twenty he was put out into the mountains with nothing but clothes this was his ascension to manhood. After a year in the Dragon-Tail mountains Ogrug returned to his tribe to find his father Bludghul as chief. After a year the tribe was dwindling and one night Bludghul disappeared. Bludghul was denounced a weakling and a coward his, father brought the same fate onto Ogrug who was cast out of the tribe. Ogrug had no money and so traveled to Hammerfell in search of work. He completed various tasks for the nobility and he was soon in the royal guard, protecting a Breton noble,he even fought in a battle against the Aldmeri Dominion. But soon after months of work a letter arrived to Ogrug that his father Bludghul was dead and that he died a noble death in the arena of the Imperial city. Ogrug took to the brothel and drowned himself in alcohol. Soon in no time he was cast out of the royal guard and was left wandering the streets of Dragonstar, Until a young Imperial man took him under his wing and let Ogrug join a band of Bandits who raided nearby provinces. Ogrug showed a lot of success in this work and some of his terrors and worries disappeared, but this had a downside. He had a large bounty on his head.

Best Memory - His best memories are of his childhood hunting and learning to wield an axe. More recent good memories is meeting a Breton woman who he fell in love with.

Worst Memory - On a raid he was in he was commanded to burn down a village. When the job was done and the buildings burn he heard the cry of a child in the house. He wanted to go help the child but there was nothing he could do the house was covered in flame.

Skills - He was trained at a young age to weild axe and sheild and this has made him excel in their use... but he has much to learn still.

Challenges for the Character - The challenges for him are many. He has no work and what ever money he gains he wastes on alcohol he is a sociopath suffering from unspecific aggressive tendencies.

Birthsign - The Warrior

Religious Views - None

Politics Views - None
This post was last modified: July 11th 2013, 04:08 AM by Plague_Walrus


Ogrug- Orc Warrior Son of Bludghul
Heceril- Altmer Vampire Lord
Frelav- Nord Werewolf
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Yay Plauge is a Orc again ^^


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@"Plague_Walrus"

Ay man, you got a nice story going - my compliments. However your character experienced tons and tons and tons of things of one year that could easily fit in a decade. He got kicked out of a tribe, he travelled a long time in search for work, he slowly started working for nobility, gradually rose higher and higher among the ranks and eventually became a Royal Guard.

Spended some time protecting a Breton nobleman. He fought in a battle with the whole lead up and aftermath and all that with it (+/- atleast 5 weeks), then he returns, hears that his father has died, becomes an alcoholic for some time, he got cast out of the Royal Guard, he wandered the streets again presumably for some time, then an Imperial finds him and looks after him, he joins a band of marauders..

They raid nearby provinces; so all that travelling takes them a lot of time - plus all the plundering and killing and stuff. He became very succesfull at being a bandit and all ---> which takes some time to become feared, experienced and whatnot. And then he gets a bounty on his head cause of allll his plundering.

It's a good story.. but this all happens in only one year? I'd say something of such an amount must've atleast happened in 5 years. And if it was my character I'd say 6-7, maybe even 8. The downside of letting a lifetime of events happen in one year for your character means that every single thing - in order to happen in one year - must've taken only a month or two. This adds not a whole lot of depth to what has happened to him. I mean if he has only been wandering the streets for 5-6 weeks than you can't really call him that desperate for work and whatnot?

Know what I mean? I hope you see my point. You aren't obliged to change it up - it's just an insight from a fellow roleplayer!

Have a good one!


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(July 10th 2013, 05:13 PM)Beor of Skyrim Wrote: @"Plague_Walrus"

Ay man, you got a nice story going - my compliments. However your character experienced tons and tons and tons of things of one year that could easily fit in a decade. He got kicked out of a tribe, he travelled a long time in search for work, he slowly started working for nobility, gradually rose higher and higher among the ranks and eventually became a Royal Guard.

Spended some time protecting a Breton nobleman. He fought in a battle with the whole lead up and aftermath and all that with it (+/- atleast 5 weeks), then he returns, hears that his father has died, becomes an alcoholic for some time, he got cast out of the Royal Guard, he wandered the streets again presumably for some time, then an Imperial finds him and looks after him, he joins a band of marauders..

They raid nearby provinces; so all that travelling takes them a lot of time - plus all the plundering and killing and stuff. He became very succesfull at being a bandit and all ---> which takes some time to become feared, experienced and whatnot. And then he gets a bounty on his head cause of allll his plundering.

It's a good story.. but this all happens in only one year? I'd say something of such an amount must've atleast happened in 5 years. And if it was my character I'd say 6-7, maybe even 8. The downside of letting a lifetime of events happen in one year for your character means that every single thing - in order to happen in one year - must've taken only a month or two. This adds not a whole lot of depth to what has happened to him. I mean if he has only been wandering the streets for 5-6 weeks than you can't really call him that desperate for work and whatnot?

Know what I mean? I hope you see my point. You aren't obliged to change it up - it's just an insight from a fellow roleplayer!

Have a good one!

No no please I value all the suggestions people give me thank you for the insight I will fix it up as soon as I can. But I also don't see where I state that it took him a year to achieve all of these things maybe I should put down that it took him a minimum of 5 somewhere in the story and change his age?

(July 9th 2013, 11:54 PM)Archmage Alator Wrote: Yay Plauge is a Orc again ^^

haha And I'm not changing anymore.
This post was last modified: July 11th 2013, 02:01 AM by Plague_Walrus


Ogrug- Orc Warrior Son of Bludghul
Heceril- Altmer Vampire Lord
Frelav- Nord Werewolf
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(July 11th 2013, 01:57 AM)Plague_Walrus Wrote:
(July 10th 2013, 05:13 PM)Beor of Skyrim Wrote: @"Plague_Walrus"

Ay man, you got a nice story going - my compliments. However your character experienced tons and tons and tons of things of one year that could easily fit in a decade. He got kicked out of a tribe, he travelled a long time in search for work, he slowly started working for nobility, gradually rose higher and higher among the ranks and eventually became a Royal Guard.

Spended some time protecting a Breton nobleman. He fought in a battle with the whole lead up and aftermath and all that with it (+/- atleast 5 weeks), then he returns, hears that his father has died, becomes an alcoholic for some time, he got cast out of the Royal Guard, he wandered the streets again presumably for some time, then an Imperial finds him and looks after him, he joins a band of marauders..

They raid nearby provinces; so all that travelling takes them a lot of time - plus all the plundering and killing and stuff. He became very succesfull at being a bandit and all ---> which takes some time to become feared, experienced and whatnot. And then he gets a bounty on his head cause of allll his plundering.

It's a good story.. but this all happens in only one year? I'd say something of such an amount must've atleast happened in 5 years. And if it was my character I'd say 6-7, maybe even 8. The downside of letting a lifetime of events happen in one year for your character means that every single thing - in order to happen in one year - must've taken only a month or two. This adds not a whole lot of depth to what has happened to him. I mean if he has only been wandering the streets for 5-6 weeks than you can't really call him that desperate for work and whatnot?

Know what I mean? I hope you see my point. You aren't obliged to change it up - it's just an insight from a fellow roleplayer!

Have a good one!

No no please I value all the suggestions people give me thank you for the insight I will fix it up as soon as I can. But I also don't see where I state that it took him a year to achieve all of these things maybe I should put down that it took him a minimum of 5 somewhere in the story and change his age?

(July 9th 2013, 11:54 PM)Archmage Alator Wrote: Yay Plauge is a Orc again ^^

haha And I'm not changing anymore.

One year is way too quick. It's only one year since he is 21 and story start when he is 20. If you change that detail it would be a very nice story!
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done!


Ogrug- Orc Warrior Son of Bludghul
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