Ragnar Ice-Blood

First name - Ragnar

Surname - Ice-Blood

Title - None

Sex - Male

Race-Nord

Age - 30

Occupation - Ragnar used to work as on ships ferrying cargo from port to port but he isn't above stealing from those who don't deserve their wealth he is currently working as a mercenary.

Faction - EbonHeart Pact.

Appearance - Ragnar is quite tall for a Nord at 6'11 and very muscular, he's eyes are storm grey and his unkempt hair and beard are oaken brown he also has a scar over his left eye.

Personality -Ragnar is quiet and solitary often found by, himself at a forge crafting blades or hunting for wild game however he is fiercely loyal to those few he trusts.

social background- pending update.

Best Memories - When he learnt how to, use a forge and crafted his armour and weapon.

Worst Memory - Awaiting update

Skills-Block, Two handed, one handed, heavy armour and pickpocketing.

Challenges for the Character-Social endeavours and trusting others.

Birth sign-The warrior.

Religious Views - Ragnar worships all of the eight divines (remember Talos isn't a divine...yet).

Politics Views-Ragnar wishes for the Ebon Heart pact to, be successful for he fears that if the elves or the beast races rule the realms of men will be in constant, strife.

Yet more Nords! Good, I need able-bodied warriors to fight... :P

I'm really confused by your comma placement, but other than that it's a pretty fair bio! I like the tough appearance but reserved personality, it's an old classic. Have fun in ESO!

the commas were MS word I writ it on there as I thought it would be formatted better

I know what happened to his brother and sister. They became time travellers! Went 4 eras into the future. Ralof joined a false rebellion, and aela became a werewolf.

Why not, haha!
Oh gosh this thread reminds me, of when I started RP'ing!

I think this bio could use a lot more details and elaboration.

One thing to keep in mind though is to be careful not to overuse some things. For example the "parents were killed when he/she was a child" and "Fiercly loyal to his/her friends and would put his/her self in dangerous situations to protect them" etc etc are very overused hero type things.

I think the title is rather bad though, it's a bit... "presumptuous" for lack of a better word, or going too far. I mean something simple like "wind-catcher" would be a good title for a sailor but "elves bane" is too blatant and over-the-top. Not a bad name for a sword or other weapon though, provided it was a renown weapon.

Yeah I toatally agree.
This was written however, quite close to when I started RP'ing here, so its bound to have fatal flaws and a cliché here and there.