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Started by Alucardeo
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Hey everyone. This is my second RP so feel free to be a bit critical, but in a non disrespectful way.

This RP will take place in the second era in the reach. Everyone will share one village and live their lives. There are several hostile tribes and a few neutral villages. Occasionally there will be an attack on our village, and what your chars do will decide whether our tribe is destroyed or strives(it's gonna be easier than it sounds)

Things your char can do: Hunt, raid, craft, socialize, pray, etc.

Notable events in tribe history

-The Coilean clan founded the settlement and built it's foundations
-Yeomhwode, Thorinsfeil and Gaerton clans joined.
-A giant fire caused many members to die and forcing the survivors to rebuild and scavange food. Many did not make it through the winter.
-A short, but deadly flu spread through out the tribe killing many and causing other to flee.
-In an act if desperation a group of warriors from the tribe attacked a niebhoring village taking many of their resources and killing plenty of their men causing a great rivalry and hatred between the two.
-after several minor raids and ambushes between the two rival tribes, they attacked our village in a massive raid where we lost more lives than any of the previous disasters.
-Two weeks after the massacre, a group of the ferocious warriors of the tribe had snuck into the other village and left no survivors. The smoke of the emptied village could be seen through a good part of the reach.

Families
-Coilean
-Yeomhwode
-Gaerton
-Thorinsfeil

Al's Char(that's me Cute)
First name: Áed

Surname: Coilean

Title: The Cremator

Race: reachmen

Gender: Male

Age: 50

Occupation: Shaman

Appearance: Pale, rough appearance, three deep scars in his chest, scorch mark on left eye.

Personality: Calm, irritable, slow to anger, loves his child.

Backstory: He was born into a tribe fifty years ago. There he lived with his widowed mother who taught him magic. By the age of sixteen he had already witnessed seven friends killed by other tribes. By the age of twenty two he was attacked by a sabre cat which would have killed him had his mother not saved him. Shortly after the attack he met the woman who would soon bare his children. Ten months later his son was born. His son grew into a fine hunter and warrior, staying away from magic, and all things related to it. Four years after the birth of his son, his daughter was born. She became a great alchemist and an adept hunter. But her life was short. She was killed during the "masacre". Two weeks later his son came to him with the rest of the remaining warriors and asked him to aid them in the retaliation. After the attack he found every corpse and turned them to ash, along with every tent, fence, bush, blade of grass. His act of pyromania gave him the title of Cremator

By the age of thirty nine, he had become a powerful shaman, and respected by many. Though his life was lonely. His wife dead from a disease, and his daughter murdered, and his son often off somewhere, he was alone.

Best memory: The birth of his son.

Worst memory: Death of his daughter.

Challenges for the character: His loneliness makes him hard to get along with.

Skills: Destruction, Conjuration, light armour, Alteration.

Birthsign: Mage

Religious views: Worships Old gods.

Al's Other Char
First name: Jurus

Surname: Coilean

Title: The butcher

Race: reachmen

Gender: Male

Age: 27

Occupation: Hunter/Guardian

Appearance: Pale, Rugged, red haired, muscular, countless scars, wide scar across lips, emerald yes midnight black war pain on his neck spelling out his name.

Personality: Hot headed, quick to anger, easily offended, loud, entitled.

Backstory: Jurus was born during a war between tribes. There were many warriors, and scouts coming and going during his childhood. By the age of twelve warriors from other tribes had already tried to kill him twice, but inevitability failed. By the age of twenty four his sister was killed during the "masacre" and the village responsible was destroyed by him and several other warriors from his tribe.

Throughout his adulthood he had fought many warriors, mages, scouts and had never lost. Though another warrior could have finished him, he spared Jurus' life. However Jurus did not return the favour and broke the mans neck when his back was turned.

Best memory: His first kill

Worst memory: Death of his sister

Challenges for the character: His personality and attitude make him difficult to respect, while his anger makes him act to quickly and make terrible decisions through out his life.

Skills: Two handed, archery, light armour, hand to hand.

Birthsign: Warrior

Religious views: Worships hircine exclusively.

Ragnar's Char
This character was made for use in the Heist RP.
I am aware that this may not be fully fleshed out.

First name: Vyctrlettle

Surname: Yeomhwode

Nickname: Vyc

Race: Reachperson (Reachwoman)

Gender: Female

Age: 22

Occupation: Hunter for her Reach tribe, healer

Faction: Her tribe

Personality: Vyc is kind and lighy hearted to near all whom she meets and is fairly quick to trust those that aren't of the Reach. However, she can be quick to anger at times and quite ruthless.

Appearance: Vyc stands at a reletively tall five foot, ten inches with an athletic yet muscled build and has fairly pale skin. One of her eyes is a deep cobal blue and the other a light shade of green. All her teeth sit neatly in her mouth save for her two front teeth which have a small gap between them.

Backstory: Vyc was born to the Reach and has lived with her tribe as long as she can remember. Her parents were both huters like herself, with her other also being a proficent healer and maker of potions. When she was aged twelve she ventured out on one of her first few hunt with a hunting party from her tribe, however, they were tracked by a bear. Smelling it's prey close the bear charged at Vyc, whom was lucky to dodge the somewhat lumbering beast, that had instead started to maul one of her fellow tribe-members, and fire a few hastiy aimed arrows at the starved creature. Through sheer luck one of the barbed arrows lodged itself in the creatures chest directly inside it's left lung. Weakly it staggered around before being brought down by the her and her fellow's arrows.

Best memory: Killing the bear that nearly mauled her and making a trinket from it's skeleton

Worst memory: Being nearly mauled by a bear when she was younger

Challenges for the character: A times she can be shy and distant orr will just let her mind wander, maining that she has trouble concentrating unless hunting or healing. Her skill with blunt weaponry is all byt non-existant.

Skills: She is proficent with both one handed and two handed blades, and is dskilled with medium and light armours. Her role as a healer is secured by her skills at restoration magics. And as a hunter she if skilled with bows.

Birthsign: The Steed

Sarin's Char
First name: Theodyval

Surname: Gaerton

Race: Breton (Reachmen)

Gender: Male

Age: 29

Occupation: Hunter

Appearance: Theodyval is a larger than average Reachmen with a light black coloured hair and short beard, his skin is pale and his muscles strong.

Personality: he has a fiery heart filled with malice. He enjoys striking his enemies and spreading himself in their blood.

Backstory: Theodyval was born to one of the tribes older clansmen and was raised to hunt for the tribe though he had constant battles with his anger striking out several times at merchants on the road with his bow. He has a wife, two sons and a daughter.


Challenges for the character: He is a difficult one to talk to generally very hostile to others, He often spends large amounts of time by himself refraining from the company of others, He dislikes most who are not from the reach and often refuses to talk with anyone but the Orcs or Reachmen from the area.

Skills: Archery, Light Armor, One Handed, Dual Wield.

Birthsign: Warrior

Religious views: Worships Dibella.

Rumors: He killed his father in a fit of rage telling the tribe he was killed by a sabre cat,
He killed thirty Nords without being touched,
He once fired an arrow a hundred yards before it killed his only brother who he fought constantly with.

Rofl's Char

Ri's Char
First name: Morven
Surname: Coilean
Title: The-Captive-Taker
Race: Reachmen
Gender: Male
Age: 27

Relatives: Frasis-Wife-26 years of age
Tynan-Son-10 years of age
Nepos-Son-9 years of age
Uaile-Daughter-9 years of age
Weylin-Son-7 years of age
Duach-Son-6 years of age
Aethra-Daughter-5 years of age
Jurus-Cousin-27 years of age
Áed-Uncle- 50 years of age

Occupation: Hunter, Guardian, Warrior

Appearance: Pale, a little taller than the average reachman, black hair, warpaint on most of his body that is red, green, black, and blue, muscular, scars over most of his body.
Personality: Out of battle: Calm, loud, arrogant. In battle: energetic, angry, loud, hot headed, joyful, a little sadistic. 

Backstory: Morven was born during a tribe war. He grew up constantly practicing with weapons, and when he was 11 he was able to kill his first man. The nord was charging at his father and had numerous wounds. Morven drew his bow, released, and smiled when the arrow hit the nord in the neck, killing him instantly.

Morven continued to help defend the tribe for a few years, until at 15 he was allowed to come on a raid. Morven, his father, and a few other tribe members tracked a nord merchant, his guards, and his family. They numbered about 12, 9 nine guards, the merchant, his wife, and his daughter. When the time was ripe, Morven and his tribe charged the guards and merchant family. The merchant quickly fell, then three of the guards. Morven's father and the other tribe members had the rest of the guards handled, so Morven turned to the family. He walked up to where they were huddled, in the cart they had been sitting in. Morven killed the mother quickly, and was about to kill the crying daughter when he realized something. The mother had been a Breton, which made the daughter a half-Breton. She is not as bad,Morven thought. She could have her eyes opened, and become one of us. Morven asked how hold the daughter was. "14," she answered. Morven nodded and grabbed her hair, dragging her to in front of his father, who had just killed the last guard. "This girl is my captive," Morven said. His father agreed, and everyone headed back to the tribe's home, only one of their members dead. 

Two years later, Morven's father was killed in a raid. Morven decided that he liked the girl he had taken captive two years before, his first captive. He made her his personal servant, and promised to free her if she would become his wife. She agreed and they were married. 

In his whole life, Morven has never lost a battle. He is one of the most feared warriors in his tribe.


Best memory: Taking his first captive.

Worst memory: His father dying.

Challenges for the character: No ability with magic, has a hard time with some because of his wife, his arrogance, can be a little sadistic, can risk to much to take captives. 

Skills: One-handed (Dual wielding), archery, light armor, hand-to-hand, survival skills, running.
Birthsign: The Shadow
Religious views: Boethiah, Hircine, Malacath, Mephala.

Max's Char
First name: Gunjar

Surname: Thorinsfeil

Title: none

Race: reachmen

Gender: male

Age: 27

Relatives:

*Father Tormun (deceased)
*Wife iedith
*son Tormun II

Occupation: farmer

Appearance: Tall, Thin, Farmers tan, brown/blonde hair, broad smile, scar above his left ear,

Personality:Ambitious, Cruel, Lustful, Greedy

Backstory: Gunjar grew up on his fathers farm his father was a violent drunk who often beat Gunjar his Mother had died giving birth Gunjar eventualy was fed up with his father and Killed him by burrying an axe into his head and burrying him in the crop

Best memory: When he found his favorite knife with an antler handle with silver bands he had hid it from his father

Worst memory: His fathers beatings

Challenges for the character: Socializing, The Dark,

Skills:Farming, Hunting

Birthsign: W.I.P.

Religious views: Divines(not permanent)
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This post was last modified: May 4th 2014, 06:15 PM by Alucardeo


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I would consider joining this.


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Thats good to hear. I won't post the RP. Thread until a bit after eso launches.


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Ya posted!!! Great!


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@Sarin Strdr, @Roflwaffleauthoritah, Ragnar. I need your bios. If you already have one, please adjust it to fit my template.


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Mines in the character bios subforum.
Titled "Reachperson"


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First name: Theodyval

Surname: Gaerton

Race: Breton (Reachmen)

Gender: Male

Age: 29

Occupation: Hunter

Appearance: Theodyval is a larger than average Reachmen with a light black coloured hair and short beard, his skin is pale and his muscles strong.

Personality: he has a fiery heart filled with malice. He enjoys striking his enemies and spreading himself in their blood.

Backstory: Theodyval was born to one of the tribes older clansmen and was raised to hunt for the tribe though he had constant battles with his anger striking out several times at merchants on the road with his bow. He has a wife, two sons and a daughter.


Challenges for the character: He is a difficult one to talk to generally very hostile to others, He often spends large amounts of time by himself refraining from the company of others, He dislikes most who are not from the reach and often refuses to talk with anyone but the Orcs or Reachmen from the area.

Skills: Archery, Light Armor, One Handed, Dual Wield.

Birthsign: Warrior

Religious views: Worships Dibella.

Rumors: He killed his father in a fit of rage telling the tribe he was killed by a sabre cat,
He killed thirty Nords without being touched,
He once fired an arrow a hundred yards before it killed his only brother who he fought constantly with.


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Why are there multiple clans?


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I wondered about that.
And that the way that the OP is written seems to say that our chars are murdered at some point? Sorry if this sounds like critisism, but saying that someone's char has died/is going to die is a massive RP No-no.


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This was kinda rushed. Any suggestions you have I will use it.


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You never answered my question regarding death....


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My bad, you dying is your choice. If you wish to die you can. Just give me a heads up. Also multi chars are obviously aloud.
This post was last modified: April 7th 2014, 01:47 PM by Alucardeo


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I would rather not have my char(s) die


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That's fine. But if you wish to die let me know.


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