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Seeking Perfection Prologue


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Seeking Perfection

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She had her father´s white-gold hair. And her mother´s face. And beautiful, beautiful eyes. Ruwenmar marveled at them, whenever his love let him see their daughter. Such an orange... such a beautiful orange. Such bright, such vibrant eyes! How his daughter looked at him with these wavy lines of pupils... he still couldn´t believe he was father now, believe that such was in within in the patterns of possibility.

But no matter how much the sight of his daughter sent Ruwenmar into transports of delight, he knew that his heart would soon be lacerated. He held the child in his arms, only a few months old, practically newborn, caressing his daughter. Then he looked up, facing his beloved, the girl´s mother.

"It´s the time my love. I have to leave this blissful state."

Tenderly Ruwenmar touched her golden face.

"Please. I don´t want to see tears in your eyes. Remember, for all eternity, you will be the chamber of my heart."

Ruwenmar turned away, allowing a tear to run over his face. Then he looked at his daughter, and a smile wiped the sadness from his face.

"Order will return soon. This realm will be lost, destroyed. I will return as soon as time permits, as soon as the Mad God is himself again."

Slowly Ruwenmar began to walk. At first tentative, not sure if he really wanted to leave. But his pace became more quick and steady the more distance was between him and his love. As he walked he took a last look over the realm.

To his left, deep fog and gloomy moors, echoing depression.

To his right, strong colours and bright land, bursting of ideas.

He sighed as he passed an obelisk of shimmering, mirroring crystal. He would not risk his or his daughter´s life by staying here. He had to return to the Blessed Isles and leave the Shivering behind.



Two Hundred Years Later












This post was last modified: October 31st 2013, 11:52 AM by Idriar


Who controls the Septim crown?
Who keeps the Allesian Heresy down?
We do, we do

Who knocked Yokuda off the maps?
Who keeps the Dwemer under wraps?
We do, we do

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So sad :(




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Yes, it is, @Triskele ;)

By the way, I changed the layout of my stories for I grew annoyed of updating up to eleven topics whenever I posted a new part. And the number of odf topics to update grew with every story...

Now I only need to update the chapter overview and the previous story :D how you find that?


Who controls the Septim crown?
Who keeps the Allesian Heresy down?
We do, we do

Who knocked Yokuda off the maps?
Who keeps the Dwemer under wraps?
We do, we do

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Smart! I should handle my stories more efficiently xD




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