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Stlen Ralys


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Firstname - Stlen

Surname - Ralys

Title - Ghostwalker

Sex - Male

Race - Dunmer

Age - 294

Occupation - Captain of the Granicus, Bounty Hunter/Mercenary, Slave Owner, devout follower of the Temple, Leader of the Waterblades

Faction - Ebonheart Pact

Appearance - A normal looking Dunmer, gray skin, red eyes. Stlen also has his long hair pulled back in a bun. He is normally in ebony armor, chitin or bonemold armor with a set of red goggles and a red scarf. Whenever possible he has a black, red, or blue cloak over his armor. Stlen has a long, thin scar on his left cheek that he got from an ex-lover and a brand on his left upper inside arm.

Personality - Stlen is nice, loyal, and honorable around his friends. He feels very conflicted about being a slave owner, he does not like owning those of other factions (and formerly Argonians) but wants to keep his family's fortune. He is a real romantic and is always trying to find the right person to spend his life with.

Social Background/Backstory - Stlen was born to a Dunmer father named Nirosi Ralys and an unknown Dunmer mother. He had a good childhood, learning the merchant and slave trade from his father. Stlen was a great student but has always felt conflicted about being a slave owner. At first he could deal with it, his father only owning two or three slaves, but then one day when Stlen was walking he found a few caves on his father's property, caves full of ebony ore veins. His father quickly built up an ebony empire, which he used to buy more and more slaves, increasing Stlen's dilemma. Agitated he spent some time traveling and met an ordinator named Barete Elerel. After a few months Barete and Stlen realized they were deeply in love with each other and decided to wed each other. Stlen received permission from Barete's father to marry her but his father wanted to get to know Barete better before a wedding happened. After three months, Nirosi agreed to the wedding and a date was set for in six months. A few weeks after the wedding though Barete Elerel was killed by a group of Bosmer. He decided to get a brand of her name on his left upper inside arm. Stlen spent a few months hunting the Bosmer down and drinking/drugging his life away. He eventually realized that Barete and his father (who had died when he was an alcoholic) would want him to get on with his life. After that he dated Haleya Vells. Stlen eventually figured out that Haleya was just interested in his money and confronted her. Angry at his finding out the truth, Haleya slapped him across the face giving him a scar across his face and then ran off into the night, killing three guards on the way. After that he decided to buy a ship and become a bounty hunter. His first target? Haleya Vells. He had his childhood best friend, Tulver Nedion, manage his estate while he was away on his long bounty hunts.

Best Memory - Kissing Barete Elerel after telling each other that they loved each other.

Worst Memory - Learning of Barete's death.

Skills - Sailing, Heavy Armor*, Destruction*, Restoration, Alteration*, Speech, Swordsmanship*, Alchemy*
*=Major Skill

Challenges for the Character - His anger, drinking, drugs, being a slave owner, and wanting to become a vampire.

Birthsign - the Thief

Religious Views - He is a devout worshipper of the Tribunal and Temple.

Companions: Two huge grey wolves named Kleia (mother) and Vaeril (father) (who's lives have been extended through Restoration magic) that just had a litter of seven pups, three males and four females. Stlen also has a white horse named Snowbolt and a black horse named Darkflame. His first mate on the Granicus is a Dunmer named Endli Thiles, she is an old childhood friend. He also has two twin ebony swords, named Hailstorm and Blazefury, Twins of Stealth.

Business: Stlen's estate is managed by slaves and servants who mine ebony, grow Saltrice, Ash Yams, and Marshmerrow, and breed Guars, Silt Striders, Rats, and a few horses.
This post was last modified: June 11th 2014, 04:57 PM by Ri'Do'Ja


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Nice to see you're creating a Dunmer! More characters = good ;)

Only suggestion I'd make is that you put the details regarding his former lovers in Social Background/Backstory, and keep the Personality-section for his quirks and habits? Just a thought :)

I'll keep an eye on the updates, Ri'Do'Ja! Keep up the good work :)




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I like how you made him a ship captain and slave-owner. Keep in mind though that that might hinder his adventuring (or other quest type stuff in general).

I especially like the "scar on his left cheek that he got from a former lover".


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(January 14th 2014, 11:04 AM)Triskele Wrote: Nice to see you're creating a Dunmer! More characters = good ;)

Only suggestion I'd make is that you put the details regarding his former lovers in Social Background/Backstory, and keep the Personality-section for his quirks and habits? Just a thought :)

I'll keep an eye on the updates, Ri'Do'Ja! Keep up the good work :)
Hahaha, yes. I felt it was time.

Yes, I will move that to Social Background/Backstory as soon as I have that part ironed out and keep personality, just for personality.

Thank you, it means a lot.

(January 14th 2014, 12:58 PM)Took an arrow in the knee Wrote: I like how you made him a ship captain and slave-owner. Keep in mind though that that might hinder his adventuring (or other quest type stuff in general).

I especially like the "scar on his left cheek that he got from a former lover".
Truth be told, the ship captain is more of a hobby and transportation to his bounties.

Thanks, although I got the idea for that from a website.
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Updated, please tell me what Great House you would imagine him to be a part of and tell me what you think.


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Slavers tend to be Dres or Telvanni.


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House Hlaalu probably, given his merchant heritage. Or maybe Telvannii given the slave thing.


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What does Dres do, religion wise? Also, what did you think about the actual bio?


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Also his estate would have to be massive to breed Silt Striders and why would he breed rats?

Religion wise? they're just like any other house.
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It was intended a little as a joke, especially after someone's domestic rat comment in the Thuum box.


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That was me and my rat comment. I think its quite interesting that he breeds, rats. Especially and their normally considered vermin.


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(January 15th 2014, 01:16 AM)ragnar-ice blood Wrote: That was me and my rat comment. I think its quite interesting that he breeds, rats. Especially and their normally considered vermin.
Thank you.


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