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The Elder Scrolls: Kalheim


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The Elder Scrolls: Kalheim is a fan fiction based off of the critically acclaimed video game series The Elder Scrolls. Taking place on the newly discovered island province of Kalheim, Riroden Orkraft IV is forced to take up arms to defend his land against the worst threat it's ever faced. The Elder Scrolls: Kalheim will be a multiple story fan fiction series. The first story is The Dark Prophecy, and focuses on the in-story counterpart of the title. It will be 30 chapters long and my plans as of now are to have everything finished with it by August, after which the second story will be revealed and begin. If there are any questions or comments you have regarding TES: Kalheim, feel free to message me. I will get back to you as soon as I'm able.

Also, I ask that you respond to this thread if you are going to be reading. All feedback of my current work as well as wishes for my future chapters are encouraged to also be posted here. Here's the link to TESK official website, which includes the history of the Orkraft family, fanfiction timeline, characters, and all completed writings.

http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/


UPDATES
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April 5, 2013 - Sorry for the delay of the Gilreich City map being posted. Been ill lately. It shall be posted within minutes. Also, chapter three should be finished by today. I have moved chapter two to the forums section, updated the story page, and have even created a portion of the forums for feedback and suggestions.

April 7, 2013 - Chapter 3 is finished and posted to the site. All pages have been updated, including the characters and photos pages. I will begin work on Chapter 4, and hope to have it up by a week from today.
This post was last modified: April 6th 2013, 10:12 PM by RirodenOrkraft


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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Bump.


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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(March 22nd 2013, 08:18 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: Bump.

I will give it a read when it comes out.


The two worst strategic mistakes to make are acting prematurely and letting an opportunity slip; to avoid this, the warrior treats each situation as if it were unique and never resorts to formula, recipes or other people's opinions.
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(March 24th 2013, 01:53 PM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 22nd 2013, 08:18 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: Bump.

I will give it a read when it comes out.

The prologue is currently out, chapter one should be out by midnight (est time)


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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(March 24th 2013, 03:27 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 01:53 PM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 22nd 2013, 08:18 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: Bump.

I will give it a read when it comes out.

The prologue is currently out, chapter one should be out by midnight (est time)

Chapter one is up!


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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(March 24th 2013, 07:56 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 03:27 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 01:53 PM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 22nd 2013, 08:18 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: Bump.

I will give it a read when it comes out.

The prologue is currently out, chapter one should be out by midnight (est time)

Chapter one is up!

Okay, gonna go read it now :)


The two worst strategic mistakes to make are acting prematurely and letting an opportunity slip; to avoid this, the warrior treats each situation as if it were unique and never resorts to formula, recipes or other people's opinions.
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(March 24th 2013, 08:27 PM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 07:56 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 03:27 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 01:53 PM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 22nd 2013, 08:18 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: Bump.

I will give it a read when it comes out.

The prologue is currently out, chapter one should be out by midnight (est time)

Chapter one is up!

Okay, gonna go read it now :)

Awesome. Can't wait for feedback :D


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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(March 24th 2013, 10:00 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 08:27 PM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 07:56 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 03:27 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 01:53 PM)Zupleo Wrote: I will give it a read when it comes out.

The prologue is currently out, chapter one should be out by midnight (est time)

Chapter one is up!

Okay, gonna go read it now :)

Awesome. Can't wait for feedback :D

Nice, even better than I thought it was gonna be. When will the next chapter be out?


The two worst strategic mistakes to make are acting prematurely and letting an opportunity slip; to avoid this, the warrior treats each situation as if it were unique and never resorts to formula, recipes or other people's opinions.
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First chapter is quite a good introduction to Riroden and the start of his story from being a humble collector to the savior of the land. It's the traditional adventure of rising to defeat an encroaching evil! I like how you described some of the environments such as the arena, and the cheers heard from it as he made his way through the streets. You've certainly put quite a lot of work in detailing the history and people.


Character Profiles:
Endaros Ilmori - Buoyant Armiger
Sunrio - Aldmeri Justiciar

Taren Jucanis - Imperial Deserter (Used for The Black Shroud RP)
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(March 25th 2013, 10:25 AM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 10:00 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 08:27 PM)Zupleo Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 07:56 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote:
(March 24th 2013, 03:27 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: The prologue is currently out, chapter one should be out by midnight (est time)

Chapter one is up!

Okay, gonna go read it now :)

Awesome. Can't wait for feedback :D

Nice, even better than I thought it was gonna be. When will the next chapter be out?

I plan to have Chapter Two out by April 2nd, giving it some leway due to Easter being on Sunday.

(March 25th 2013, 01:33 PM)Horizon Seeker Wrote: First chapter is quite a good introduction to Riroden and the start of his story from being a humble collector to the savior of the land. It's the traditional adventure of rising to defeat an encroaching evil! I like how you described some of the environments such as the arena, and the cheers heard from it as he made his way through the streets. You've certainly put quite a lot of work in detailing the history and people.

Thank you. You seemed to catch the point and basis of the chapter really well. I know I'm not the greatest writer, but I'm glad to know that my work is appreciated and that it is liked. As I said, chapter two should be out within the next week. I will give a little preview in the first post to say what it's going to be about.


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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Chapter two is up everyone!


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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(March 30th 2013, 09:15 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: Chapter two is up everyone!

A trusty noble nord joins Riroden on his journey; Serarro's story is actually quite similar to my Skyrim Altmer's character so I can imagine how it all played out. Looks like things will continue to build up! I'm guessing he might end up with a stout party of friends to aid him against the growing evil.

The drunkard's lines were pretty funny. Behold! The epic non-existant battle between a pet dragon and Clavicus Vile above the city!


Character Profiles:
Endaros Ilmori - Buoyant Armiger
Sunrio - Aldmeri Justiciar

Taren Jucanis - Imperial Deserter (Used for The Black Shroud RP)
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(April 2nd 2013, 05:19 PM)Horizon Seeker Wrote:
(March 30th 2013, 09:15 PM)RirodenOrkraft Wrote: Chapter two is up everyone!

A trusty noble nord joins Riroden on his journey; Serarro's story is actually quite similar to my Skyrim Altmer's character so I can imagine how it all played out. Looks like things will continue to build up! I'm guessing he might end up with a stout party of friends to aid him against the growing evil.

The drunkard's lines were pretty funny. Behold! The epic non-existant battle between a pet dragon and Clavicus Vile above the city!

Yeah, the funny thing is that the drunkard wasn't originally supposed to be in the chapter. I kind of thought him up at the last second. Originally it was going to be the angry woman and the Argonian who told him. I plan to have the next chapter up by the end of the week, but naturally since real life comes first, I can't make any promises.


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9173271/1/Th...ls-Kalheim

That's right everyone, The Elder Scrolls Kalheim is now on Fanfiction.net! It will continue to be posted on my own website http://www.elderscrollskalheim.webs.com as well.


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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CHAPTER 3 IS UP! Read and review everyone :D


The Obsidian Brotherhood

A strong arm to slay the weak.
An iron heart that knows no fear.
And a foul mouth to boast about it!
Such are the virtues of the pact!

Check out The Elder Scrolls Kalheim
http://elderscrollskalheim.webs.com/
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