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The first of the prophesy


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Firstname - Arcron

Surname - Tregic

Title – Priest (Daedric Prince only known to Daedra)

Sex - Male

Race – High Elf

Age - 254

Occupation – Non

Faction – no one

Appearance – Tall slender with a easily identifiable mark on left arm blue eye, short light gray hair

Personality – orderly and helpful always trying to be kind to those he does not know and a strict follower of tradition

Social Background/Backstory – Born to low nobility he only wished to follow the divines and make is family proud when he started going to a school for mages he soon started to have dreams of daedra and oblivion he thought them only nightmare for there infrequency at first but after starting work in a temple to the divines the dreams began to come regularly and soon he was having them every night. It was only when the daedra came and destroyed the temple did he decide to leave and try and figure out what the daedra said to him when he told them to stop they all turned and looked at him and stopped what they were doing they then walked over and bowed to him and the closes said ‘yes King’ then left. He believes his gift and abomination and wishes to be rid of it. It goes against all his standings. He has now place himself in a self imposed exile to walk tamriel looking for who he wants to become.

Best Memory – Saving the temple from the daedra by ordering them to stop and go back to oblivion

Worst Memory – Finding out he was prophesied to unit the daedra and destroy the world (daedric prophesy)

Skills – Skilled mage and has the ability to control daedra with a mere gesture
Challenges for the Character – Find out the truth about himself.

Birthsign - Mage

Religious Views – Not sure anymore perversely divines


(small note if people think this is interesting then please tell me and i will make the bios of the other two characters)
This post was last modified: December 19th 2013, 07:44 AM by One of Creation
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Okay I'm sorry to be harsh but this bio is very OP and even more lore breaking.

First and foremost, a Daedric king. Are you serious? do you have any idea how maddeningly lore breaking and OP that is?

Second, your char is apparently "prophesied" and "destined" for greatness, leadership and all that. That is again majorly lore breaking.

Third, the bio is lacking a lot of detail. Primarily in the backstory, personality and appearance.

Also I'm just saying but to an Altmer 26 is a mere infant. 260 is young for an Altmer much less 26.


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(December 18th 2013, 03:11 PM)Took an arrow in the knee Wrote: Okay I'm sorry to be harsh but this bio is very OP and even more lore breaking.

First and foremost, a Daedric king. Are you serious? do you have any idea how maddeningly lore breaking and OP that is?

Second, your char is apparently "prophesied" and "destined" for greatness, leadership and all that. That is again majorly lore breaking.

Third, the bio is lacking a lot of detail. Primarily in the backstory, personality and appearance.

Also I'm just saying but to an Altmer 26 is a mere infant. 260 is young for an Altmer much less 26.

Thank you for the information i find it useful and will try and make a less OP bio for my next character and i think i will drop the prophesy characters for now my next one and the next story will be less lore breaking. I have also modified the character bio for My character can you please reply and tell me what i have done wrong or right this time(i did not say when the three were destine to come they may arrive far into the future it is not just for this game)
This post was last modified: December 19th 2013, 07:47 AM by One of Creation
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The main problem with this bio is the whole Daedric thing. The problem hasn't really been fixed at all because he's still some "Daedric king", despite the fact that Daedra don't have kings, and that he has frequent dreams about Oblivion. The dreams are okay but only if your char was a Daedra worshipper or something like that. But the fact that he can command Daedra despite not having summoned them himself? that's a very big problem.


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