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Two arrows in the air
Two arrows leaving lair

Two arrows to find their way
Two arrows to let them pray

Two arrows bringing death
Two arrows with every breath


by Emeric Blackwood, 13th of Morning Star, Morndas 11:52pm
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Two arrows in the air
Two arrows leaving lair

Two arrows to find their way
Two arrows to let them pray

Two arrows bringing death
Two arrows with every breath
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is that it? it's a bit, small...


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A nice poem, though are you sure "heir" is the right word?


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well, yes it's meant to be short, i am not used to write poems or bio's or something like this but now i really shine and i really get excited =)
so i could extend it if something comes to my mind

and yes if heir means the "stuff" you get when somebody dies... not the best description i guess but i'm tired
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Two arrows in the air
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Two arrows to find their way
Two arrows to let them pray

Two arrows bringing death
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no it doesn't, it means the one who's entitled to the stuff/position etc... like the heir to the throne.


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An heir is a successor. Like when a king dies his eldest son is generally the heir to his throne, meaning he'll inherit it.

I believe you meant air, as in the stuff we breathe.


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well then it's exactly what i wanted to write i hope =)

the two arrows posses great power as they are able to kill which is kind of a heir i guess?
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I don't think so... an arrow is an inanimate object, therefore they can't really have an heir.


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not even in an artistic way?


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That I couldn't tell you as I'm certainly no artist.


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Hahaha well, then it's okay i guess ;)


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Two arrows to let them pray

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How about, "Two arrows, that bring despair" ?


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Love you rangar =)
That's really good =)


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Two arrows to let them pray

Two arrows bringing death
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Glad to help ;)


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Thank you again ragner I've an even better one IMO, but you helped me a lot =)

Changed: Two arrows that bring despair ----> Two arrows leaving lair


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